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3rd July 2006, 10:27 AM
#511
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déjà vu (21. A GRIND DUN SENT)
A GRIND DUN SENT
before Aswath could complete she took him over the steps and they both stood there on the top step and saw down the steps to find .................................................. .
Shree sitting in the same place with her legs soaked up in the running Cauvery with her hands placed folded embracing her bent knees and her head bent down between her hands
Sharmi looked at Aswath, while he tried to look away from her. She again looked at Shree and looked back at Aswath
Ashwa .... pidivaadham ..... possessiveness ..... kovam, idhu first time illa da. naan un kitta solla ninachadha avo sollitta...
oh ! appo ellam kettu kittu dhaan ninnu kittu irundhiyaa, enna kootu sadhiyaa....
stop it Ashwa ! avo inga vandhu unna paaka vandhadhu enakku theriyaadhu, unnoda bike inga ninnadha paathen, adhaan vandhen
avala pathi unakku enna theriyum?
enakku .. theriyaadhu ... he smiled and turned his head away n came close to her and watched her eyes.... enakku, avala pathi theriyaadhu .... unna madiri avala porandhadhu lendhe enakku theriyaadhu, aanaa unna...unna vida avala pathi enakku jaasthiyaave theriyum....
Aswath started to turn and walk facing away from her
unakku avalukku pudicha poo theriyumaa ? enakku theriyum
unakku avalukku pudicha subject,place ennannu theriyumaa ? enakku theriyum
unakku avalukku pudicha music,movie, singer edhaavadhu onnu theriyumaa ? enakku theriyum ....
Sharmi looked at him when he turned
Sharmi smiled little and came near him and said en .... unakku avalukku pudichavan .... adhu yaarunnu theriyumaa ?
adhuvum unakku theriyum ... but unnoda possessiveness ! adhu unna vidala ... unakku avo mattum dhaan ulagam,illa?
Ashwa, avalukku pudicha poova pathi therinju vechindiye, andha poova avo thanakku sondhamaa vechu paathirukkiyaa ?
avalukku pudicha music, movie, subject nnu varusiyaa sonniye, andha music movie a vida periya vishayam avaloda charactera fulla purinjundiyaa .... ? pudicha vishayangala mattumae yosicha nee, unna avalukku pudichidhaa nnu yosichiyaa .... ?
Ashwath slowly looked at her eyes, he could see a sparkle in her eyes and the smile of hers was not unrealistic....
unnoda pidivaadham, unna yosikka vidala .......
unnoda possessiveness, unna maathiduthu ........
hmn, idhellam enakku eppadi theriyum nnu paathiyaa ......... avo vera naan vera illa Ashwa ....
unakku pudichadha pathi dhaan nee yosichiye thavira, unna pidichavangala pathi nee yosikkave illa ...
idhu varaikkum avo un kitta ennikkaavadhu pesaama irundhirukkaalaa? but avaloda limit a thaandi pesinadhu illa
idhu varaikkum avo un kooda pazhagaama irundhirukkaalaa? but avaloda limit a thaandi pazhaginadhu illa
nee avala thappa purinjukitta ... avaloda openness ayum, veguli thanathaiyum LOVE appadinnu purinju kitta .... anaa ippavum, en eppavum unnoda appadi oru nimisham kooda irundhadhu illa ....
hmn, unnoda proposal a avo kitta sollum podhu ... avalukku orey shock, avo annikkike unkitta sollitta illa .... adhuvum evvalavu polite aa solliruppa ....
nee dhaan, marupadiyum marupadiyum avala thondharavu pannikittu irundha.... idho, idhe idathula ... indha idathula avo un kitta pesinadhu unakku nyaabagam illaya ...
When Aswath raised his finger to converse something .... Sharmi interrupted ... theriyum, appo annikki propose panni rose koduthappo en vaangikkittannu dhaane kekka vara ... hmn, annikki nee enna avo thaniyaa irukkum podhaa koduthaa ... avoloda class la ellarum irukkum podhu kodutha ....... hmn, appo mattum avo ninaichirundhaa appove moonjiya thrippikittu poirukka mudiyum ... illa athana friends munnadiyum unna .... cha ... andha avamaanam kooda varakkoodaadhunnu dhaan avo vaangikitta .... appuram unna paathu avo idha explain pannala ...
Ashwa, enakku theriyum ! but idhu athanaiyum paatha appuramum naan unna verukkala ...
Ashwath was stunned to hear this from Sharmi !
Ys, idhu ellame enakku theriyum .... ellamae .... but still... naan unna thaan .... she sniffed and turned to her left for a second and looked at Ashwath and gave a smile .......
nee adha purinjukkaama illa ... but unnoda possiveness avala vittu kodukkala, unnoga kobam, en moolamaa avala emaatha thoondradhu ..... Ashwa ! nee avalayo illa ennayo emaathala ... unnaye emaathikkira ....
When Sharmi and Ashwath were talking face on, Shree appeared in between them ... there was absolute muteness and hush at that very moment ...
Sharmi tooka an apace to see Shree's face and tardily looked at Ashwa and then looked at toes .... Ashwa was speechless and seemed realizing.... him too, for the first time, with his head bent down !
Ashwa, unable to bear the silence, tried to move away, by that time ....
Ashwath ........ Shree called him politely .... oru nimisham .... he stood as such like a log, unable to turn his face at Shree, looking away from her .....
Shree .... avana vidu ..... said Sharmi .... so saying moved towards Shree ....
Naan poganum .... so saying Aswath started to move ....
Shree climbed a step to call him again ... when she slipped and losing the balance, fell rolling down on the rocky steps ... within a moment that both Sharmi n Ashwath didnt realize, Shree had rolled down 4-5 steps .... with Sharmi shouting
Shreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .........................
Saga 21 : A GRIND DUN SENT is the Anagram of UNDERSTANDING. Something that wakes u up from ur ZZZZZZZzzing ..... Snooze Alarms = Alas! No More Z's
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3rd July 2006 10:27 AM
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3rd July 2006, 12:27 PM
#512
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Bingle..... Great going...
The realization of happiness happens only after experience of pain.
If we desire to blossom like a flower in the garden of life,
Then we must learn the art of adjusting our life with the thorns!
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3rd July 2006, 02:34 PM
#513
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3rd July 2006, 03:07 PM
#514
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Ashwath --------> Shree
Sharmi ---------> Ashwath
Shree ?????????
The realization of happiness happens only after experience of pain.
If we desire to blossom like a flower in the garden of life,
Then we must learn the art of adjusting our life with the thorns!
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3rd July 2006, 03:11 PM
#515
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Originally Posted by
rami
Ashwath --------> Shree
Sharmi ---------> Ashwath
Shree ?????????
koodiya seekiram indha Equation a complete aayidum
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3rd July 2006, 03:19 PM
#516
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Originally Posted by
bingleguy

Originally Posted by
rami
Ashwath --------> Shree
Sharmi ---------> Ashwath
Shree ?????????
koodiya seekiram indha Equation a complete aayidum

naan thinking.....................
waiting for ur next saga
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3rd July 2006, 04:10 PM
#517
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An early KB style scene.
I imagined each line being punctuated with a increasing pitch of violin notes.

Originally Posted by
sharmi
Ashwa, avalukku pudicha poova pathi therinju vechindiye, andha poova avo thanakku sondhamaa vechu paathirukkiyaa ?
Jang

Originally Posted by
"sharmi
avalukku pudicha music, movie, subject nnu varusiyaa sonniye, andha music movie a vida periya vishayam avaloda charactera fulla purinjundiyaa .... ?
Jagajang

Originally Posted by
sharmi
pudicha vishayangala mattumae yosicha nee, unna avalukku pudichidhaa nnu yosichiyaa .... ?
a high-pitch piece lasting a full five seconds.
Some mystery untied here. The story is interestingly poised. We await the next episode.
PS: Sathi-Mathi ? Long time no see.
மூவா? முதல்வா! இனியெம்மைச் சோரேலே
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3rd July 2006, 04:14 PM
#518
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5th July 2006, 04:13 PM
#519
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déjà vu (22 . A SCREENS TOLD)
A SCREENS TOLD
Shree climbed a step to call him again ... when she slipped and losing the balance, fell rolling down on the rocky steps ... within a moment that both Sharmi n Ashwath didnt realize, Shree had rolled down 4-5 steps .... with Sharmi shouting
Shreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .........................
Ashwa inga paren .... Shree.... Shree ... Sharmi ran down the steps to see Shree lying face down. Ashwath turned rapidly came down towards them, for a moment hesitating but killing all his egoistic feelings ran and saw Sharmi trying to lift Shree's head
Shree had a thick bruise on her forehead, but still closing her eyes .... meanwhile two three guys who were bathing nearby came up to gather around Sharmi who was having Shree on her lap still unconscious ....
Thanni, thanni ... hearing one of the men shouting Ashwath ran down the steps took his handkerchief and immersed it and brought it back wet ... crushed it to sprinkle some water on Shree's face .... still they could feel no reaction on his face ....
auto, dei velu ... auto koopidunga da ... shouted a man with a big moustache ... yaaru ma indha ponnu...
en... ennoda friend dhaanga sniffed Sharmi ... holding Shree's cheeks and chin, moving it to give her consiousness .... Shree Shree ... inga paaru .... she gently patted on her cheeks ... Shree ...
Sharmi looked at the perplexed Ashwath ...
anne, auto nne ... shouted on man on top ...
Without much thinking Ashwath said .... anne, konjam thalaya pudichikanga .... so saying he grabbed her by legs and slowly three men lifted her and then running slowly near the auto ...
Sharmi was running behind helpless ....
Sharmi ... nee kooda ukkaru ... inga nursing home .....giving a question look asked Aswath
thanvandhiri aaspathirikki kku kootikki ponga pa ... inga dhaan periyaar nagar la irukku ...
illeenga avanga chittappa oru clinic vechirukkaaru ... inga dhaan pakkathula dhaan, naan paathukkiren ... said sharmi while the auto driver kicked the bajaj auto to a steering start .... the auto sneered away from the crowd
Sharmi was seeing Shree still without consiciousness .... lying with her head swinging behind the seat ... Sharmi slowly gave her forearm from behind and supported her head ... The auto entered the Raghavendra madam road and took a right towards West gate road .... and reached Sri Ranga's Clinic in 4 minutes ....
Ashwath was right behind the auto ... while Sharmi asked him to call for her chittappa ... Sharmi ... naan pudichikkiren , medhuvaa erakkidalaam, ulla kootindu pogalaam .... seekiram ...
By this time one of the man who had come with his wife ran down to help Ashwa and Sharmi to bring Shree inside the clinic .... when the nurse came out to switch the front light .... realizing who it is ... ran back to the room to inform Dr. Srinivasan ....
By the time Srinivasan got up ... Sharmi n Ashwa with the other man brought Shree inside ... Srinivasan, keeping the cool head of a doc, directed them to leave her on the bed ... Sharmi ...ennamma aachu ... meanwhile he takes Shree's right hand and checked the pulse ....
Sharmi was very much agitated and confused, she was constantly pestering nanna dhaan pesindu irundhaa, thadikki vittu vizhundhutta ....... ippo eppadi irukku maama ? ....... meanwhile Aswath entered the clinic again after paying the auto driver though he refused to take the money .....
okok, shes normal, kavala padaadha ... nothing to worry .... by that time, Sharmi seeped tears in her eyes ... SHarmi, adhaan onnum illannu sonnene, dont worry, everything will be perfectly alright ...
mayakk... mayakkamaa irukkaalae maama, enna aachu
onnum illa, adi patta vegam, avvalavu dhaan, indha injection pottadhukkkappuram ellam seriyaayidum .... ok, dont worry
but still he wasnt able to control Sharmi, by that time, Ashwa moved towards Sharmi, vaa namba veliyila nikkalaam .... so hearing him, Sharmi moved out of the doc's room and walked outside with her left forearm wiping off the tears in her cheeks...
Ashwa went n stood outside near his bike and turned back to see SHarmi sniffing and walking towards him. He could see her eyes red and disturbed...while he saw Srinivasan coming out n calling...
kanna ... unh ...unnoda per enna ...
Ashwath ...
Anh, Ashwath, oru favour da kanna , thalaila adippattadhu naala, it would be better if we could scan her, nee konjam en kooda variyaa, we shall take her to the hospital ... anh, please ...
sure doctor... varen replied Ashwath ...
Ashwa said to Sharmi nee veetukku po, naan paathukkaren ...
vendam, naanum kooda varen
illa vendam Sharmi, unnaala control panna mudiyala ...
illa, paravaa illa, am ok, naan varen ... said Sharmi
Oh, Good, Good so saying Srinivasan opened the back door of his car while the nurse came with a little force on her leaps ....
Doctor ......................
Srinivasan turned to see her hands showing towards the clinic ... seeing that he rushed inside.... Ashwa n Sharmi giving each other pale looks stood there in dead silence ... hurridly started walking towards the clinic .....................
Saga 22 : A SCREENS TOLD is the anagram of SECONDS LATER...Children, Students, Employees are all set for something called Vacation Times = I'm Not as Active, would that be a slogan or a reality ?
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5th July 2006, 07:24 PM
#520
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BG
kadhai suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper.............appo eppavo sonnadhadhaan ippavum sollren.............iam clueless...........story enga pogudhunne theriyala..........very intresting
Anbe Sivam

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