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    hmm...........

    one more part of jigsaw puzzle.



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    muthalla Sujatha paaniyila 2 Srirangaththu thEvathaikaL, ahraharaththu sambaashaNai. Aduththu thriller effect-il Raghu valathu kai marmam. AppuRam oru return of a "made for each other" jOdi. Naduvil konjsam vayasu paiyankaL thalai kaattinaarkaL. Thalaiyai suththaathE enRu athatti vaiththirukkiREn. Ippadi puthu maathiri kathaiyellaam eppOvaavathuthaan padikkak kidaikkum. kathai kaLam vERu naan munporu kaalam 15 varusham puzangkiya idam! ennavO romba sOthikkaamal aduththa thavaNaiyai thanthuvittaar enRaal nallathu!
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.

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    kada nallave pogudhu, ana elleathukkum enna thodarbu endru thaan vilangala?!

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    déjà vu ( 7. SAVE SENSE)

    SAVE SENSE

    "Hello, Hello ... athai Srinivaasan irukkana, naan Bhashyam pesaren"

    "Yennada Bhashyam? yenna kaalangaarthaala, yellarum nanna irukaalono ?" questioned perplexed lakshmi, younger sister of Sri Ramanuja Iyengar

    "Anh, illa aththai, Shree kku dhaan, vandhu, edho ketta kanavu polrakku, adhu....."

    "indha kaalathukku kozhadhelukku .........., iru srinivasana ya koopidaren .... Srinivaasa, Srinivaasa, bhashyam pesaran paaru.... di, ivale .... Radha, Srinivaasana koopidu .... bhashyam pesarannu sollu....

    "Hello, solluda Bhashyam !" was srinivaasan's voice which cracked a bit on the telephone.

    "Srinivaasa, konjam aathukku vandhuttu poriyaa.... Shree kku konnjam.... yennamo bayandhirukka .... kanavo yennamo.....
    Bhashyam was nearly choking to complete the sentence.... bursted out !

    "Bhashyam, dei, inga kelu ... yenna aachu, konjam padharaama sollu.... dho paar, yennada nee chinna kozhandha maadiri... "

    Sobbing nearly ... "Srinivaasa, konjam seekiram vaada, kozhandhaiya paaru da ....please ... konjam vaayen ..."

    "Seri seri ... dho vandhutten...."

    "Yennada ? Shreekku yennavaam" asked puzzled Lakshmi !

    "Onnum illama, paathuttu vandudiren .... Radha, yennoda kit a konda, Shirt a konjam yeduthu kudu..."
    Srinivaasan took his kit to come out his house n started to walk towards Bhashyam's house, a few hundred meters away !



    "Srinivaasa, vaada, konjam seekiram poi paaren...."said Shree's patti Kamala ....

    "Yenna maami, yenna unga pethi yenna solra ... " so saying Srinivaasan entered the room to find Bashyam holding Shree in his laps and trying to give her some comfort !

    "Di, Shree .... yezhundhukko, kanna muzhichu paaru, Srini chithpa vandirukken paaru .... come on ... "

    When Srinivaasan was holding her left had to feel the drum beat of her pulse, Shree opened her eyes ..... looking baffled.

    "Yenna, muzhichundutta, paarungo" screemed Kamalam to Bhashyam.....

    "Kanna, Shree .... onnum illaye, are you alright ? idho paaru .... yenda Srinivaasa, paaren da ...."

    "Ummm umm , paathundu dhaane irukken" "Di, Shree, yennadi aachu unakku, yenna pannina ?"

    "Thideernnu Ammmmmaaaaaaaa nnu perusu alara satham, nekku onnumae puriyala, paathaa, ivo dhaan kathirukka, thideernnu mayakka vizhundhutta ...." so said Kamalam looking at Srinivaasan

    "Shree, dho paaru, r u ok ? can u get up ? paaru, medhuvaa, slowly, yezhundhu ukkandhukko" meanwhile Shree attempts to slowly get up from the bed.... "Ys, appadithaan, Bhashyam, andha thalagani ya pinnadi vai..... saanjukko da .... medhuva, ys, appadithaan...... Good

    A few minutes passed by

    "Shree, Shree .... yennada aachu unakku ?"

    "Sri chithpa, onnu milla, something ... guess a dream !" "I dont remember exactly, yennmo, something .... scary .... " Anh ... some roller ... road roller, on somebody's hand" "Oh" Shree exclaimed, n kept her right hand's thumb n middle finger on her two ends of her forehead....

    "Yenna verthu kotti irukku paarungo, Fan a perusaa vaingo" was Kamalam..

    "OK, ok ... just relax ... onnum illa .. ok ..." was Srinivasan "Ok chithpa" replied Shree

    "Bhashyam, nothn to fear... just dream ... bayandhu poirukka ... avvalavudhaan ... bayappadara madiri onnum illa ... nee vera yellarayum bayamuruththaadha ....Kaapi saapida kooda vidala manni.... "

    "Dho yeduthundu vandhudren .... "

    Sipping the coffee Srinivaasan exclamined .... "Filter coffee pramaadham manni " .... "idhu BRU da .... giggled Kamalam"

    Everyone laughed including Shree ....

    "Neku coffee kuidikkum bodhellam andha Narasus kaapi advertisement la Thenga srinivaasanum manorama vum nadippalae, adhu dhaan nyabagam varum " "Andha kaapi indha mel thunduaala vaangindu, appdi ..... ssssssshhhhh nnu oru urinju urinjinaa devamrudhamaa irukkum di. .... Pattu, Kaapi ... Narasus .... " before completing in came Radha, Srinivaasan's wife interupting ... "Yaaru nna, yenno mo pattu nnu kettudhu" .....

    "vaadi ma ... pattu nna sonnen, ada daa ... Ranga ... thappu thappu ... kannathula pottukiren .... " " Chellam Radhanna sollirukkanum " ...........

    There was huge laughter .................. and shyed Radha ....


    Saga 7 : SAVE SENSE is the anagram for SEVEN SEAS. Completing this Seventh saga, was nearly like crossing seven seas ... I guess i am doin some, atleast some justice to the screenplay ! Your feedbacks are most welcome !

    Moreover, this is a story that is based on the concept deja vu, where for supporting the concept, i ve chosen a way, with characters and supporting situations..... Please pool in your suggestions on this ...
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    hmm...

    I wonder which folks get all panicky to call a doc, (though related to them) for merely shrieking during sleep.(dream).

    Not CONVINCING ENOUGH BG

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    /////////Sipping the coffee Srinivaasan exclamined .... "Filter coffee pramaadham manni " .... "idhu BRU da .... giggled Kamalam" ////////

    Outdated old joke, yet a giggle def would escape from all readers I suppose

    Keep writing

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    Actually she faints..which I guess is scary enough to call the doc esp if he was a block away and is your relative ..though Shree should call Srini chittappa if he calls her mom manni :P

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    SP, Shree is projected as a very pampered child from the beginning! With a grandma & parents very "alive" in their senses, it is not so unbelievable!!!! "PeNNai pORRi vaLakkaNum" is almost universally followed, isn't it? Vayasu ponnungka rombave chella kONdukaLthaan!!!
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.

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    ss, pp

    true. u are right.


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    Shree should call Srini chittappa if he calls her mom manni
    Erratum ! I extremely contrite for that. Please find the edited version !
    Well, shld not be giving any reasons ! but i ve framed Saga 7's content in almost 7 mins ! n typed the same in 17 mins ; n that was the 7th saga ! Almost that day i wasnt planning to release that saga, coz my work pressure ! u all know, weekend was approaching ! n infact i had named the saga Seven Seas coz of those "7" factors 7th saga, 7 mins, 17 mins n completing 7 sagas n 7 days was like crossing seven seas !

    Not CONVINCING ENOUGH BG
    U ll find it soon..... she is a chella ponnu for her father, n more over u ll find the father character more tensed n reactive than the mother character, as for all u know, daughters are more chellam to their fathers ..... dont u think so ?

    shakthi, ss n pp, thanks for all the comments ! I can be thankful to u guys for devoting your time !

    Outdated old joke,
    Ya, i know... but the fact is ! in very orthodox families, they have a set of old jokes which have stood in their minds n aptly fix them in situations ... u cant expect them to talk like Vivek though i ve fixed a character for such things, who will b introduced soon !

    Expect the unexpected !
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    Well many ppl feel that there is no connection in the sagas happenning. Ys, initially there is no connection ! These are two parallel happennings being told simultaneously. In fact i didnt want to introduce the saga in Saga 1 now, but due to so many views, thought of bringing those characters again ! Just imagine this as a screenplay, this is not just a written story ! So many things and many scenes cannot come together ... also i ve shortened every saga, so that it goes good for readers ...! Thanks readers, Thanks a ton for all ur views n motivation ! well for some ppl, i know it brings NOSTALGIC memories, places like Srirangam tht i ve mentioned, n ppl who had been in Singapore, will definitely know that the Saga 1 happenned in Singapore ! I ve infact tried to maximum refrain from saying the place, the first time itself... just a challenge for screeplay, whether i am able to take those ppl to the very place, instead of saying the name of the place... infact, the place from Saga 2, Sri Rangam, also has been mentioned only later !

    Just try to get the place from the given facts ! Try Guessing

    Keep ur fingers crossed for the Saga 8 ...... GETS HIGH IN IT

    On ur desktops .............sooooooon !
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