kaadhal.........

[Shakthiprabha.]

plz download murasu editor or
e-kalappai

[srijk]

dear friends ,

this one xpresses the feelin's of a ladyluv who was hurt by the words from her intimate lover.

kaathirukiraen...

oworu vaarthaiyilum thulirtha kaadhal kaaviyangal
indru ranangalaai malarndhadhaen???

undhan sorkalin vellathil moozlgiyaval
indru aeno moochu thinarugiraen!!!

oworu sollilum marumurai pirandhaen
indru marumurai ninaikka ennaiyae izakkiraen!!!

un vaarthaigal ingae sidhariya muthukalaai...
vaarthaigalai thaeda manamillai...
thaediyavatrai maalaiyaakka manadhil dhidamillai...



en aazh.. manadhukkul pudhainthupona
un sorkanaigalai ninaikka marukkiraen...
unnaval enbathai marakka seidha
un mozhigalai ninaikkaamal marakkiraen...

suyanalam...
un mozhigalukku marumozhi koori
unnul irrukkum ennai
kaayappadutha manamillaamal...

ini ,
irrugiya en idhayathai
un illaipaartrum varavukaaga...

un kai..udhari naan kollapogum
poi kobathirkaaga...

ennai thol saithu nee ketkkapogum
mannipirkaaga...

pirapaiyum marakka seiyum
un aarudhalukaaga...

ennaal thulirkkapogum enakkaana
un iruthuzhi kanneerukaaga...

un sogam maraikkapogum
en aravanaipirkaaga...

iruthiyil jeyikapogum
num kaadhalukaaga...

kaathirukkiraen...............
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[srijk]

dear friends
i wrote this after the kumbakonam fire accident

AMMA ENDRU.........

palli mudindha maalaigalilae,
un mugam kaana thudithadhundu...
indru vendhupoana palliyilae,
un mugam kaanaamal irukka thudikiraen...

thavaraamal dhinamum ennai aemaattri
veedu sendravanae..
indrum ennai aemattri
sendrirukka koodaadhaa...

andho!!!!!!
thangaiyidam nee sandaiyittu
poattukonda nagapoochu...
en karuppu thangatthai indru
karugiya thangamaai kaativitadhae...

thangamaai ,vairamaai vazharthaenae...
ippadi thottadhum sidharidum
saambalaagi pogavaa???

kannukkul kanmaniyaai irundhavanae...
eppadi kandupidikka mudiyaamal
urumaari pogavaa???

nee pirakaamalae irrundhirundhaal
vizhiyodu sendrirukkumadaa en sogam...
ippadi pirandhu , pirindhu
en uyiraiyum aedutthu selgirayae...

nee kaalaiyil kodutthu sendra mutthathin
eeram kooda kaayavilaiyadaa
adharkkul mugam theriyamal
pudhaindhu ponayae !!!

indha paaviyin irudhipidi soarukkagavaa
endrumillaamal ootivida sonnaai
indru!!!

siru thee kaayatthai kooda
unnaal thaanga mudiyaadhae...
indru theepilampirkae iraiyaagiyum
amaithiyaai urangugirayae...

kannaa..
endradhum oadi varuvaayae...

indru uyir karaiya
katthugiraen,kadharugiraen..

oru murai kooradaa
amma endru.........

[srijk]

dear friends!!
no comments for my last 2 poems??
"kaathirukiraen" and
"amma endru"
is anythin' wrong with that

[selvakumar]

thangamaai ,vairamaai vazharthaenae...
ippadi thottadhum sidharidum
saambalaagi pogavaa???

"ippadi thottadhum sindhidum" would be more appropriate.

indha paaviyin irudhipidi soarukkagavaa
endrumillaamal ootivida sonnaai
indru!!!

Fantastic.. Today is mother's day. But today those departed souls can say wishes to their mothers from heaven only.

oru murai kooradaa
amma endru.........

Nice finish.

[minnalpoo]

hey sri the last one was absolutely baffling
i never read melancholic poems
but urs was wonderful.
good ending
please do continue

[rami]

"Penaval un peyarai naan ezhuthiyathillai...
Pena mul pattu nee kaayam pada koodathu enbatharkaga...

Un peyarai en ithayathil ezhuthi vaithirukkiren...
Enrum unnai kaayam pannatha en rathathal..."

[selvakumar]

Nice indeed rami. Write more on this.

"Penaval un peyarai naan ezhuthiyathillai...
Pena mul pattu nee kaayam pada koodathu enbatharkaga...

Un peyarai en ithayathil ezhuthi vaithirukkiren...
Enrum unnai kaayam pannatha en rathathal..."

[malligai]

elaam nala iruku...