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Thread: Scriptwriting for Annamalai Part 2, anyone??????

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    Outside in the corridor of the hospital room where Ulagu lies, is Nurse Vaishu!! Pacing the floor like a caged animal, the Nurse is desperately waiting for Ulagu to regain consciousness. Without her side-kick and confidante Bhargavi who's still in remand, Nurse Vaishu is at a loss as to continue her charade with Ulagu!! To make matters worse, she now has to kow-tow to that loose cannon Gomathy Nayagam who has appeared out of nowhere and is now keeping a hawk eye on Ulagu!!

    Meanwhile, Shanthi comes visiting to see Ulagu.......

    Thoduram....

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    It’s a very posh remote house, somewhere in the east coast road. There is a car parked in the driveway but none to be seen around. The camera enters a room in the first floor thru the door in the balcony and this room is full of cigarette fumes. Camera zooms in and there is vinayakam smoking. There are bits of cigarettes and a few empty bottles around him. He is depressed and is thinking of something, very upset with the wedding… Images of people in the family, starting from MM, run thru his mind, all unclear, hazy and random….and finally focuses on one person….the little one…he has a big gulp and gets up determined…..his eyes filled with only one thing….REVENGE…..
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    What is this?... ellam "beejasuran" kathaia irukke.. sethu tholanjathellam thiruppiyum ezhunthu varuthu.... antha paavam jeeva vantha sari... intha kandravigal en uyiroda irukkanum?

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    Cindy - Waiting for you to join the fray, Pa!! Don't be on the side-line!! Chumma kathayai yeduthu vidingel, Pa!!

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    Spewing another thick cloud of smoke, Vinay yet again visualises his humiliation at Jodhi's hands!! Finally, she had her pound of flesh, didn't she???? The ultimate thrashing she could have given him!!! All that cajoling, side-long innocent flutter of her lashes, pretending to go along with the wedding plans and finally pulling the rug from under him!!! He's got to get back at her!!!! All that drama of innocent rooming in with his own brother Subbu, only to turn around and make it permanent!!! But how is he going to make her pay?????......

    Into his turmoil, enters his former father-in-law Tamil Kumaran who stands before him, smirking with the villainous gleam of "an I told you so" look!! Noticing, his presence in the dimness of the smoke acrid room, Vinay sheepishly stands up to greet him, not knowing what to say. Finally, he musters the courage to say, "Vanga Mamma"!! To which Tamil Kumaran yet again throws another disgusted look at him and nods a greeting .........

    Thoduram......

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    Back in Alwakurucchi, Gandhimadhi and Sivagami (her sister-in-law) are settling into the Ratnagiri mansion. Valli is busy playing with her infant son.

    Just then, High Priest Nallayappur comes calling.
    He is welcomed by Gandhimadhi Amma. After the formal introductions to Sivagami, Nallayappur informs Gandhimadhi about the Sanggu Thiruvizha. He tells her that Annamalai and Thavasi were agreeable to her presiding at the festival, as befits her ownership of the temple property deeds.

    However, instead of being elated, Gandhimadhi looks troubled.

    In her mind's eye, she sees Pattalathar lying dead in a pool of blood... the temple deeds fluttering in the breeze in front of the picture of Lord Annamalaiyar ...
    The words "Andavan sottu kudumbangalay alikkum" echo in her mind ...
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    At the Thirunelvelli District Hospital, Ulaganathan regains consciousness. He looks around him, spots Gomathinayagam and calls to him. But before Gomathi can reply, Vaishu rushes into the room upon hearing Ulagu's voice, delighted to see him awake.
    But Ulagu greets her with an icy stare. Vaishu feels worried and is about to say something when another visitor enters the hospital room ... it is Shanthi.
    ***
    The moon shines above the Annamalaiyar Temple in Alwakurucchi, and is reflected in the temple pond.
    The Kovil Paati wanders among the ancient pillars of the Sanggu Mandapam. She contemplates the age-worn paintings on the walls of the Mandapam, eerily lit by flickering oil-lamps. She senses someone's presence and turns around.
    Chittan bows respectfully to her, his hands held in silent namaskaram. He then points soundlessly to a painting depicting the Sanggu Thiruvizha procession. The Kovil Paati nods and says, "Soon the Festival will be held at last... The wheels of Destiny are turning, and what was meant to be, will be..."

    Suddenly a cold breeze blows through the Mandapam, extinguishing the oil lamps. The Kovil Paati and Chittan stare at each other in consternation ...

    THODARUM ...
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    As Ulagu regains full consciousness, he becomes aware of both Shanti and Nurse Vaishu's presence. Behind them, hovering ever so anxiously is chatter-box Gomathi-nayagam. While Vaishu, ever so subtle to assert her claim to her presence in his life, is also mindful of her surroundings and those around her! She speaks up, "Doctor? Ippe eppadi irruke??" Making herself busy, by adjusting the drip stand, she says further, "What Doctor, first you hire me to take care of your mother, but now that she's as fit as a fiddle, it appears to be your turn, for me to take care of now", she ends her sentence lamely while plumping his pillow!!

    Meanwhile, "Mappillay???? Do you remember me???? I am back!! Thanks to the grace of that Perumal!! By this time, it is that gundu Bhargavi's turn to eat ragi balls in prison, Pa!!", he interjects ever so gleefully!!

    Watching all this in silence is Shanti as she cocks her head enquiringly at the Nurse's presence, here in the hospital room!

    Thoduram.......

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    Wow!Sonu, Nirosha, TS and annamalaiar, keep it going!!
    I happened to browse by and found your thread by chance.

    You guys have what it takes.

    Keep it up!!

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    Annaa...malai!

    The chant echoes through Annamalai's mind.
    She sees the shrine with the statue of Nandi in the middle of the temple pond.
    On the steps leading down to the pond is Chittan.
    "Did you think that all your troubles are over, Annamalai?"
    Chittan shakes his head sadly.
    "There is more that Fate has in store for you ... But will you complete your destiny??"
    With that, the Chittan starts to beat his drum ... images swirl in Annamalai's mind ....
    She sees the many-pillared Sanggu Mandapam ... the conch sounds ... A temple procession in full swing ... two pairs of hands struggle to grab some property deeds ... then a hand adorned with bangles pointing a gun ... two shots ring out ...

    Annamalai wakes up in her bed, worried about her visions ...
    THODARUM ...
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    Police sirens are blaring away in every nook and cranny of the city,as the police dragnet scours for the fugitive Diwakar. Road blocks have been placed in major exit points to apprehend on sight, the murderer of Jeeva, up till recently a guest of the Chennai High Court prior to his conviction and sentencing. But on the way to a maximum security penitentiary, located at the outskirts of the city, Diwakar makes his escape in a getaway car with some accomplices!!

    Meanwhile, Insp. Anbalagan pays yet another visit to Diwakar's family home to interrogate his parents and sister Sheela on the whereabouts of the escaped prisoner. On reaching their home, he knocks on the door and waits for someone to open the door for him.

    On hearing the knock, Diwakar's mother opens the door and is shocked to see the tall policeman, looking stern and quietly appraising her. Cold sweat breaks down her back, as she contemplates his visit this time. "Vanga, vanga, yenna inthe pakkum?", she enquires trying to sound cool! "Yen mahan-ekke, yetthu problem-ille-leh?", she tries again while trying to quell her anxiety!

    Anbalagan replies, "It is about your son, that I'm here!! May I come in?" Without preamble, he barges in without further prompting from Gauthami, Diwakar's mum. Looking around, he enquires of the two occupants and finds they are not at home. With a nod of his head, two constables immediately appear at the doorway, and with Anbalagan's signal, dash upstairs and the back of the house, to raid the house looking for Diwakar.....

    Thoduram....

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