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    Topic started by K.Sudhakar(srimangai) (@ 220.224.43.12) on Tue Sep 7 12:27:27 EDT 2004.




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    Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.*) on: Tue Sep 7 21:46:18 EDT 200




    An absolute opposite of my reaction to the seaside experience! I always find the sea, waves, the sands filled with perpetual cheer, mischief, energy, mystery etc but never such tyranny!
    ¸üÀ¨É¢ø ÅÇõ, Å¡÷ò¨¾¸Ç¢ø «Øò¾õ, Á¢¸×õ ¦À¡Õò¾Á¡É ¯ÅÁ¡Éí¸û!À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸û,‚Áí¨¸!





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    Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.*) on: Tue Sep 7 22:46:05 EDT 200




    ¦¸¡ïºõ ÅõÒ ¦¸¡ïºõ ÅÕò¾òмý: þô¦À¡¦¾øÄ¡õ Å¢¾¨Å¸û ¦À¡ð¨¼ ÐÈôÀ¾¢ø¨Ä- ÅÕò¾õ «ÐÅøÄ («Ð ÅçÅü¸ôÀ¼ §ÅñÊÂÐ); ÌÁâ¸ÙìÌ Áí¸ÄÁ¡ö ¦À¡ðÎ ¨Åì¸ À¢ÊôÀ¾¢ø¨Ä! ±É§Å ¾¢Õò¾¢ ¿¡¸Ã¢¸ Ôž¢ §À¡ø ±ýÚ «Á¡Å¡¨º Å¡Éò¨¾ ¦º¡øÄÄ¡¦ÁýÈ¡ø Å¢¾¨Å ÁÉ §Å¾¨É ¯ÅÁ¡Éò¾¢ø Å¢ðÎô§À¡¸¢ÈÐ!





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    tiruttakkan (@ 210.*) on: Wed Sep 8 09:24:28 EDT 2004




    sudhakar,

    it's not new moon by any means.full moon totally bleached (to clear the blemishes) and dipped in gold.you are setting new standards to emulate!
    can't put it anywhere below 70.
    ppji,
    what is auspicious for you could be irritating or unfashionable to someone else. you may do without that sarcasm (that exclamation mark has a hidden mocking smile).

    tiruttakkan





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    Kathir (@ cach*) on: Wed Sep 8 10:13:00 EDT 2004




    // ¸¼ø ¨¸õ¦Àñ
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    ¸¡üÚ Ðì¸õ À¸÷ó¾ §¿ÃÁÐ.. // ivvalavu powerful expressions.. thamizil padichu evvalavu naalachu!! i have read many poems by you. neenga ellaigalai nagarthi vachukittey poreenga, sudhakar.. engalal etti pidikka mudiyaa vaNNam.

    // ´ù¦Å¡Õ ¿¡Ùõ,
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    §Å¨ÇÂÐ... // thiNaRa vaikkiRathu.

    I will be back with more comments on this same poem, a little while after.





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    k.sudhakar(srimangai (@ 220.*) on: Sun Sep 12 01:03:00 EDT 2




    Thanks PP, TT and Kathir.
    The widow symbolism gives the extra density that the theme needs.. Nice discussions on that PP madam and TT!
    Kathir, I am happy that you have like this poem. Thanks for the encouragement. Would like to have your comments on the other parts of the poem too.
    anpudan
    srimangai





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    geno (@ 61.2*) on: Tue Sep 28 16:17:34 EDT 2004




    ¸¡üÈ¢ø «ÊòÐî ¦ºøÄôÀθ¢È þÄÅõÀﺡö ¯½÷׸¨Çô ÀÈì¸ ¨Åì¸¢È ¿¢¨É׸û!

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    geno (@ ) on: Tue Sep 28 16:38:08




    ²¾¡Å¾¡¸ þÕì¸Ä¡õ.. Áɨº À¢Æ¢óÐ ¯Â¢Ã¢ý §Å÷ Ũà þʸ¨Ç þÈì¸¢î ¦ºýȦ¾¡Õ À¢Ã¢Å¡¸ò¾¡ý þÕì¸ §ÅñΦÁýÀ¾¢ø¨Ä...²¾¡Å¦¾¡Õ ÅÄ¢...þó¾ ÅĢ¢ý ¿£Ç ¸Äí¸¨Çî º¢ò¾¢ÃÁ¡¸ ŨÃó¾¢Õì¸ì ÜÎõ...

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    geno (@ 61.2*) on: Tue Sep 28 16:39:10 EDT 2004




    "´ù¦Å¡Õ ¿¡Ùõ,
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    geno (@ 61.2*) on: Tue Sep 28 16:52:23 EDT 2004




    ¾ý ¦¿ï§º¡Î ¸¢Çò¾ø ¦ºöÐ À¡÷ò¾¡ø - ±øÄ¡Ó§Á Íð¦¼Ã¢ìÌõ ¾ý ¾ÅÚ¸Ùì¸¡É ¾£÷ôҸǡ¸ò¾¡ý ¦¾Ã¢¸¢È§¾¡?

    "¦¿ïÍìÌ ¿£¾¢" ±ýÈ¡÷¸§Ç ÍõÁ¡Å¡? ¾£÷òÐì ¸ðθ¢ÈÐ ÍÂò¨¾§Â!

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    þ¨¾Å¢¼ ¬Æ «¸ÄÁ¡¸ "ÅÄ¢" ÀüÈ¢ ±Ø¾¢É¡ø - °ÕìÌû ¸¼ø ÒÌóРŢÎõ!

    "¸Å¢¨¾" - ¸ñ½¡Ê §À¡Ä - À¡÷츢ÈÅý Ó¸À¢õÀÓõ ¸¡ðʧ ¾£Õõ ±ýÀ¡÷¸û - ;¡¸ÃÕìÌ «ó¾ þÄ츽ò¾¢ø ¸Å¢¨¾ À¨¼ôÀ¦¾ýÀÐ - ´Õ ¾Åõ §À¡ø þÕóÐ ¦ºö¸¢È¡÷!

    ¸¾¢÷ ¦º¡ýÉÐ §À¡Ä "¯ÂÃó¾¡ñÎõ" ±ø¨Ä¸¨Ç ¿¸÷ò¾¢ ¨ÅòÐì ¦¸¡ñ§¼ §À¡¸¢È¡÷!

    þ¨¾ Å¢¼ ¯ÂÃô §À¡¸Ï¦ÁýÈ¡ø - ¦È쨸 ¾¡ý §ÅÏõ!

    «¾ü¦¸í§¸ §À¡ÅÐ !!

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