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    [tscii]nAn - ¿¡ý [/tscii]




    Topic started by ¸¾¢÷ - Kathir (@ cache1-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on Thu Sep 2 03:37:23 EDT 2004.




    ¿¡ý
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    ±ý¨É ¿¡ý À¡÷ò¾§¾ þø¨Ä..
    Å¢ÅÃõ ¦¾Ã¢ó¾ ¿¡û Ó¾ø
    ²§¾¡ ´Õ À¢Ã¾¢À¢õÀò¨¾ò¾¡ý
    ±ô§À¡Ðõ À¡÷òÐ Åó¾¢Õ츢§Èý,
    «¨ºÂ¡¾ ¿£÷ô ÀÃôÀ¢ø
    À¨Æ ¦Àøƒ¢Âõ ¸ñ½¡Ê¢ø,
    þ¨Å ±øÄ¡Åü¨ÈÔõ Å¢¼
    ±ÉìÌ «¾¢¸õ À¢ÊìÌõ
    «õÁ¡ ¸ÅÉÁ¡öò ÐÄ츢Â
    ±¦Å÷º¢øÅ÷ ¾ðÊý À¢ýÒÈò¾¢ø.

    ¸¡Äô §À¡ì¸¢ø «Ð ¾ý
    ÀÇÀÇô¨À þÆó¾Ð §À¡Ä§Å
    ¿¡Ûõ ºü§È ¿Íí¸¢,
    ¸£Èø¸û Å¢ØóÐ
    ¿¢¨È Á¡È¢ô §À¡É §À¡Ð
    «Êì¸Ê À¡÷òÐì ¦¸¡ûÅÐ
    ±ôÀʧ¡ ¿¢ýÚ §À¡ÉÐ.

    þ¨¼Â¢¨¼Â¢ø º¢Ä ºÁÂõ
    ±ý À¢Ã¾¢ À¢õÀò¨¾
    ±ý ¾¡Â¢ý ¸ñ¸Ç¢ø,
    ±ý ÌðÊò ¾í¨¸Â¢ý ¸ñ¸Ç¢ø,
    ÀûÇ¢ò §¾¡Æý ¸ñ¸Ç¢ø
    ¸¡½ §¿÷ó¾§À¡¦¾øÄ¡õ
    ´ù¦Å¡Õ Ó¨ÈÔõ ¿¡ý
    Å¢ò¾¢Â¡ºÁ¡É ¯ÕÅí¸Ç¢ø!

    ¯ý ¸ñ¸Ç¢ø ¸ñ¼§À¡§¾¡
    þýÛõ Á¢¸ Å¢ò¾¢Â¡ºÁ¡ö..
    ¦ÅÌ ¿¡ð¸ÙìÌô À¢ý
    ¦¸¡ïºõ «Æ¸¡Ôõ ܼ..
    ±ÉìÌ ±ý¨É Á¢¸×õ
    À¢ÊòÐô §À¡É ¿¡ð¸û «¨Å.

    ±ý Á¨ÉŢ¢ý ¸ñ¸Ç¢ø
    §¾¡ýÚõ ±ý À¢Ã¾¢ À¢õÀõ
    ¿¢ƒò¾¢ø ±ý¨É Á¡¾¢Ã¢
    þø¨Ä§Â¡ ±Éò §¾¡ýÚõ..
    ±ý¨É Å¢¼ ¿øÄÅÉ¡ö,
    ±ý¨É Å¢¼ ¸õÀ£ÃÁ¡ö!

    ±ý ¦ºøÄì ÌÆó¨¾Â¢ý
    º¢ýÉì ¸ÕŢƢ¢ø
    ±ý À¢Ã¾¢ À¢õÀ§Á¡ ²§¾¡
    ºü§È Üξø Å¢¸º¢ôÒ¼ý!

    ±ý¨É ¿¡ý À¡÷ò¾§¾ þø¨Ä..
    Å¢ÅÃõ ¦¾Ã¢ó¾ ¿¡û Ó¾ø
    ²§¾¡ ´Õ À¢Ã¾¢ À¢õÀò¨¾ò¾¡ý
    ±ô§À¡Ð§Á À¡÷òÐ Åó¾¢Õ츢§Èý,
    ºÃ¢, ¦º¡ø! þ¾¢ø ¡÷ ¿¢ƒ ¿¡ý?

    (For those who haven't yet installed e-kalappai)

    nAn
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    ennai nAn pArththey illai..
    vivaram therintha nAl mudhal,
    yethO oru prathi pimbaththaithAn
    eppOthum pArththu vandhirukkirEn.
    asaiyAtha neer parappil,
    pazaya belgium kannAdiyil..
    ivai ellAvatraoiyum vida
    enakku adhigam pidikkum
    ammA kavanamAy thulakkiya
    ever silver thattin pin puraththil..
    kAla pOkkil adhu than
    paLapaLappai ilandadhu pOlavE
    nAnum satrE nasungi,
    keeralgaL vizundhu,
    niRaya mARi pOnapOdhu
    adikkadi pArthu kolvadhu
    eppadiyO ninRu pOnadhu..
    idaiyidaiyil sila samayam
    en prathi bimbaththai
    en thAyin kangaLil,
    en thangaiyin kangaLil,
    en nanbargalin kangaLil
    kANa nErndhapOdellam
    ovvoru muRaiyum nAn
    viththiyAsamAna uruvangalil..
    un kangalil kanda pOdhO
    innum miga vithyAsamay..
    vegu nAtkaLukku pin,
    konjam azagAyum kooda.
    enakku ennai migavum
    pidiththup pOna nAtkal avai..

    en manaiviyin kangaLil
    thondrum en prathi bimbam
    nijathil ennai mAdhiriyE illai..
    adhu ennai vida nallavanAy
    enai vida kambeeramAy.
    en chella kuzandhaiyin kangalil
    en prathi bimbamO
    satrEy kUdudhal vikasippudan..

    ivvARAy ennai nAn pArththey illai..
    vivaram therintha nAl mudhal,
    yethO oru prathi pimbaththaithAn
    eppOthum pArththu vandhirukkirEn.
    sari sol, idhil yaar nija naan?

    ..




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    Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.*) on: Thu Sep 2 11:50:03 EDT 200




    «Æ¸¡É ¸Å¢¨¾! ¾¢ÕÁ½õ ¬ñ ¦Àñ þÕÅÕìÌõ ´Õ «Àâ¾Á¡É ¿¢¨È¨Å ¾Õõ, ÓبÁ¡ìÌõ Å¢„Âõ. «ó¾ ¯ñ¨Á¨Âò¾¡ý À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢òÐûÇ£÷¸û!¾ý ¬ñ¨Á¨Â, ¬Ù¨Á¨Â, ¬¸¢Õ¾¢¨Â ¬ñ ¯½Ã §¾¨Å Á¨ÉÅ¢Ôõ Áì¸Ùõ!





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    akil (@ gtw-*) on: Thu Sep 2 12:46:22 EDT 2004




    kadhir

    miga azagaana kavithai; karuththu!

    kaNNaadiyilum, kiNatrilum uruvaththai paarththeer. anbuLLOr kaNgaLil ungaL ullaththai paarththeer.
    (btw.. i didn't think u r a family man. just kidding..i know kavithaikal kavignanin suyasaritham anRu).

    ungaLudaiya pazaiya kavithaigaLil irukkum soLvalamum, kavinayamum ithil kuRaivu enRu en karuthu.

    i do admit that simpliciy is elegant, especially when u want to express some beautiful thoughts and we don't want solnayam to dominate over poruLnayam.

    athigam pEsaREnO?! (i have a doubt. i would ask it when i get my next chance. i think i have already asked the same doubt in the past.)





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    Kathir (@ cach*) on: Fri Sep 3 00:08:28 EDT 2004




    Yes.. thanks for asking. Some of my poems have really been reflections of life.. to some extent.

    This poem tries to unsuccessfully imitate the style of veenaponavan. His style is enigmatic.

    To, PP : I will come back, as I am unable to read Tamil text now.





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    Kathir (@ cach*) on: Fri Sep 3 00:09:52 EDT 2004




    // kavithaikal kavignanin suyasaritham anRu // some of my poems have been exceptions to this rule.





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    K.Sudhakar (Srimangai)q (@ 220.*) on: Sun Sep 5 07:21:40 EDT




    ¸¾¢÷,
    «Õ¨ÁÂ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾. «¸¢ø ¦º¡ýÉÐ §À¡Ä ±Ç¢¨ÁÔõ ¦º¡øÅÇÓõ ¦ºÈ¢ó¾Ð. §¸ûÅ¢¸û §¿Ã¡¸ì §¸ð¼Ð ±ýɧš À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢ôÀ¢ø §¸ð¼Ð§À¡ø §¾¡ýÚ¸¢ÈÐ.! "±Ð ¿¡ý?" þó¾ §¸ûÅ¢¾¡ý ¸¡Äõ¸¡ÄÁ¡¸ . §¸ûÅ¢ìÌ À¾¢ø¸¢¨¼òÐÅ¢ð¼¡ø §¸ûŢ¢ý Ó츢ÂòÐÅõ Á¨ÈóЧÀ¡Ìõ.§¸ûÅ¢ §¸ûŢ¡¸§Å þÕì¸ðÎõ. §¾¼Ä¢ø¾¡ý ͸Óõ, Ðì¸Óõ..
    ¿£í¸û ¦º¡ýÉЧÀ¡Ä, ¸Å¢¨¾ ¦º¡ó¾ «ÛÀÅÁ¡¸ò¾¡ý þÕ츧ÅñΦÁýÀ¾¢ø¨Ä. vicarious life ¸Å¢»ÛìÌ º¡ò¾¢Âõ. «ó¾ Ũ¸Â¢ø þÐ ¿øÄ §¾¼ø.. Å¡úòÐì¸û.
    «ýÒ¼ý
    ‚Áí¨¸





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    Kathir (@ cach*) on: Mon Sep 6 06:03:12 EDT 2004




    romba naal aachu forum-ku contribute panni.. so, yethavathu ezuthiyey aaganum-nu ezuthinathil konjam compromise ayiduchu. Thanks, PP, Akil, Srimangai.

    Someone told, "you are not what you are, you are what you think they think you are!"

    nijaththil naam nalla aalaa illama irukkalam.. avanga nalavan-nnu ninaikkirangannu namakku manasil thonitta, nallavana transform aaga.. at least pose panna.. try panrom.

    various masks or images suppress panni panni, the real-self kaanama poiduthu.





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    tiruttakkan (@ rash*) on: Tue Sep 7 00:09:57 EDT 2004




    60 ¾ÉÁ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾. ¸¾¢÷ ¿£í¸û ¦º¡ýÉ ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý ´Ç¢ ÁüÈÅâý À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸Ç¡ø ±¾¢¦Ã¡Ç¢òÐ ¯í¸¨Ç Å󾨼Ôõ§À¡Ð ¿£í¸û ¸¾¢÷¾¡ý ±ýÚ ¯½ÃÅ¢ø¨Ä¡?

    ¾¢Õò¾ì¸ý





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    k.sudhakar(srimangai) (@ 220.*) on: Tue Sep 7 01:47:46 EDT 2




    kathir,
    «¸¢ø À¸÷ó¾¾¢ø ±É즸¡Õ ¯¼ýÀ¡Î ¯ñÎ...
    þó¾ì¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ø ¦º¡ø¿Âõ, ¦À¡Õû¿Âõ ¦ºÈ¢ó¾¢ÕôÀ¢Ûõ,
    ´Õ ¯Â¢÷ôÀ¢ý ¦¾¡¼÷× ( continuity?) º¢È¢Ð º¢¨¾ÀðÊÕ츢ÈÐ.
    ±ÉìÌôÀð¼¨¾î ¦º¡ø¸¢§Èý....
    ¿¡ý ¡÷ ±ýÈ §¸ûÅ¢ þÚ¾¢Â¢ø ¿ýÌ Åó¾¢ÕôÀ¢Ûõ, «ÐŨà ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾ ôâ¾¢À¢õôÀí¸Ç¢ý ¬¾¢ì¸ò¨¾, «ÅüÈ¢ý ÀÄôÀÄ ÅÊÅí¸¨Ç§Â ¦ÀÕÁÇÅ¢ø º¢òòâ츢ýÈÉ. «ÅüÈ¢ø §¾¼ø¸û þø¨Ä... þÚ¾¢Â¢ø §¾¼ø ¦ºÈ¢óÐ Åó¾¢ÕôÀÐ º¢È¢Ð ¦¿Õ¼ø... ¸Å¢¨¾ «Õ¨Á.. ¸¡ðº¢¸û «Õ¨Á.
    ¦¸¡ïºõ ¯Ã¢¨Á ±Îò¾¢ì¦¸¡ñÎÅ¢ð§¼ý. ¾Åȡ¢ý ÁýÉ¢ì¸×õ
    «ýÒ¼ý
    ‚Áí¨¸





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    Kathir (@ cach*) on: Tue Sep 7 05:14:26 EDT 2004




    aiyoo.. Srimangai. Yaar sonnanga, neenga sonnadhu sariyalla endru. I agree with you 100%. That's why i confessed that beauty was compromised, coz i was hurrying to post something. I am grateful for your comments.. and the apprciations of Mr. TT, as well. Thanks.

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