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    Topic suggested by Shilpa on Thu Apr 15 13:55:07 .


    Hi all,

    This is my first attempt...

    Please give it a read and give your comments/suggestions

    Eagerly waiting for your words

    Shilpa

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    chandy (@ 209.*) on: Thu Apr 15 14:57:39




    Hi shilpa :

    Good maiden effort! keep it up!

    A few suggestions :

    - I found some your sentences too long. It'd be good to narrate in smaller sentences.
    - I was reminded of Mani ratnam's Dil Se when i read your story . You started off well, but seem to have got a bit lost somehere midway - the theme as well as narration. I guess your intention was to narrate things in "as-&-how-one-would-think" style. But this back-and-forth movement hasnt been very effective.

    Your description of gokulashtami and its preparations made me feel very nostalgic
    I'm sure you'd do much better your future stories!

    chandy









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    babu (@ 198.*) on: Thu Apr 15 16:24:18




    good one shilpa, keep it up





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    aruLarasan (@ psip*) on: Thu Apr 15 16:32:40




    shilpA,

    very good one. the ending, which is not there, is great. pAttiyin "samaththA nIyE velagiNdudu" advice is ...
    excellent.

    endhA Uril indha kadhai nadandhadhu. nAval pazham parichchu thinnuvadhA!... you have touched some subtle points
    in this story very well. good job. the general theme of the story (as i perceive - life goes on) is beautifully
    brought out. your pi.ku is more interesting than the story itself.

    btw, is shilpA a punai peyar? the name and the story don't seem to go hand in hand )





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    shiva (@ user*) on: Thu Apr 15 16:34:22




    good effort considering this is your first story...paaraatukkal shilpa ..
    but EnOa intha incest, gay, child molestation kathaigal nerya varuthunnu ennaala purinjikka mudiyala..
    athuvum ungalOda first kathaiyilaeyae nInga antha subject aa thotirukkeenga..maybe theres a wrong concept that touching these subjects makes the story different...
    apart from that there were some long sentences which made reading dificult..
    an overall good effort..





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    babu (@ 198.*) on: Thu Apr 15 20:53:48




    Shiva,

    maybe theres a wrong concept that touching these subjects makes the story different..

    I cannot resist commenting on this line of yours. (since I too stand accused - nilAk kAthal)

    That statement makes me feel that you assume authors go about hunting and/or inventing concepts such as the ones you have mentioned above. Thats not true, sadly - I can vouch for that. A story is actually a reflection of what one sees in life, its a verbal rendition of the various facets of life. The fact that some are not comfortable with such concepts is regrettable, but that does not mean that one should not venture into the realities of life. Would you be happy if all the stories talk about the 'conventional' love, about how the hero pines for the heroine (by standing in the bus-stops for instance) ? Don't you think Tamil Literature would be claustrophobic with such mundane topics ? Do you think there would have been a "sila nErangaLil sila manithargaL" or a "mOga muL" if poeple had not dared to write socially 'unacceptable' concepts ? ( I am not comparing the my stories to them, let me remind you)

    The fact that Shilpa deals with such a touchy subject with finesse in her/his very first story itself is commendable. Keep it up shilpa.





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    shiva (@ user*) on: Fri Apr 16 09:09:31




    mmhmm...at last that triggred an argument..huh??
    perfect babu!!! i did'nt say NO...'NO' to such topics at all...
    i did'nt write such comments when each of u
    touched on such subjects...but this comment was the outcome of the increasing nature of such stories in this thread...and maybe an apprehension that writers digress from such mundane topics as love(???) to make their story conspicous...
    i knew this wud be an "egg or hen first" paradox.
    i wud'nt be elated At ALL if all the stories touch LOVE subjects..c'mon isn't there anything else?... friendship, humour, sci-fi, real-life, autobiography and what not??
    that does'nt in any way rule out that u shud'nt touch these sensitive topics...but those are increasing...thats what is alarming...
    and lemme be clear, that does'nt, in any way take the credit of the way in which shilpa has written this story..





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    Ramki (@ pm06*) on: Fri Apr 16 10:13:31




    Shiva and others, we now have 55 stories in this forum. Out of this, 3 deals with homosexuality, one with adultery(ennoda kathai hahah) and one about incest.
    Its 5/55 . But this small percentage of so called 'abnormal'stories seem to have bothered quite a few readers here.
    This really intrigues me. As Babu had mentioned,these themes are not authors invention or imagination -they are reflections of whats happening and happened in our society . We cant neglect them saying its not rite to talk about such concepts when it is very much happening.
    All these 5 stories (and others too)werent explicit ,they were approached and written with much maturity and sincerety.

    So lets not stop or discourage people from venturing into such themes





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    Ravi Sundaram Sun Sororiyan (@ 192.*) on: Fri Apr 16 11:59:4




    Ramki,
    Almost all the popular tamil magazines have editors who decide what gets
    published. But not here. No one can stop any one from publishing any
    story on any theme.

    The wide variety of themes you talk about is quite recent. Just 2
    months ago, sexual themes dominated the stories forum.

    I agree with your observation that even debutant authors have
    shown great maturity and sensitivity in handling the sexual themes. here.

    The fact that incest, homosexuality etc exist in the society is not really
    a justification for *fiction* based on it. **Nor** the fact that it is
    considered taboo by many a **prohibition**.
    For example, Time Travel does not exist. But wonderful fiction is
    written based on Time Travel. Sexuality exists. But not all sexual
    themed stories make great reading.

    So let us read/write/enjoy/discuss stories that make a good reading,
    be the theme real, imaginary, complex or taboo. As long as there is
    a wide mix of themes with no one theme dominating, I'll keep
    coming here for more.







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    Reka (@ atl-*) on: Fri Apr 16 12:07:06




    ok! Time for a sorry and a smiley
    Since its still April, thought i'd pull another one......
    Chandy, AruL, Babu, Shiva, Ramki - thanks for your wonderful dissection!

    More than the story, your arguments have made this page read-worthy )))

    Coming to the story, Chandy, i cant help but write long sentences. When i try to trim them, it disturbs the continuity. Next time, i'd pay more attention to the narration too.
    Dil sE? hmmm))

    AruL-
    Shouldnt u have been content that my character's name goes hand in hand with the story? u had to ask for more btw, my real peyar too doesnt suit the story
    nAval tree was there right in Madras in my granny's house and never failed to give atleast a handful of fruits for every gOkulAshtami. sadly, 2 yrs ago my granny sold her house to a flat promotor/builder and the first thing to go was the tree(((

    Shiva, how can we be sure that a person has not written a portion of his/her autobiography when writing about incest, gay, child molestation?????
    One can never say!! I wanted to experiment with a familiar theme and hence i chose this.

    As babu and ramki have already pointed out, these stories are not always a piece of fiction but real things that have troubled us sometime during our lives and story-writing serves as a vent to our otherwise locked-up feelings

    TGIF gotto go!!






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