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  1. 23rd January 2005, 10:44 AM #1
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    An enjoyable (very)short story

    Topic started by rajeshrs_tvm (@ 61.1.229.223) on Thu May 29 00:40:24 .


    Let me translate a "short" form of a malayalam short story which
    i enjoyed:

    -kamala,vaelaikku pogum kanavanai vaasal varai vandhu vazhiyanuppinal.
    -piragu thuvaikka thunigalai adukki vaithapodhu tholaipesi adithathu.
    -Eduthu pesiyaval alarinaal.Idi vizhundha idhayathodu veetai kooda poottaamal
    theruvin munai varai odinaal. Angae...
    -rathathil kulitha nilayil vibathil adipattu kanavan.
    kamala suyaninaivu izhandhu surundu vizhundhaal.
    -Kanavan irandhu vittaan.Kamala Vidhavai aanal.
    Aanalum aval, avan ninaivaaga rathathil podhindha
    vellai nira sattaiyai paadhukaappaaga vaithirundhaal.
    -Kamalaavin thaai avalai thaduthaal."Vaendaam andha sattaiyai thookki podu.
    ilaatti avan aathma unnai pinthodarndhu kittae irukkum..."
    aval kaetkavillai.
    -Oru naal Sanikkizhamai.Maalai aaru mani.
    thunigal thuvaikka aval kulakkaraikku ponaal.
    andha thuni moottayil kanavanadhu rathathil puranda sattaiyum irundhadhu.
    -Aval sattaiyai eduthu neeril alasa aarambhitha bodhu oru IDI MINNAL thondriyadhu.
    Maegangal irundana.
    -Aval soap eduthu sattaiyil theythu kazhuga aarambithaal.
    oru murai,iru murai ....pala murai ...
    ...illai- andha raktha karai pogavae illai!!
    -Dhideer enru vaanathil oru minnal velicham.Bhoomiyae pilandhu
    pogumaaru sapthathudan!
    -Suraavali,kaatru.saandhamaana andha neer thadaagathil neeralaigal koppalithana!!
    -ADHO...ADHO... oru vellai uruvam.andha vellai uruvam mella aval arugae vandhadhu...
    aval viyandhaal;bhayandhaal.
    "aththaaaan..."
    aamaam.adhu aval kanavanin aathma dhaan.
    uruvam aval arugil vandhu ninradhu.
    piragu kaagidhathil podhindha eadho onrai avalukku neetiyadhu.
    -aval adhai vaanginaal.
    Thirandhu adhu ennavenru paartha nerathil uruvam maraindhadhu.
    aanal oru Asareeri mattum muzhangiyadhu..
    "Idhu pudhiya venmaegam soap.orae alasalil azhukkellaam poividum
    palichidum venmaikku venmaegam soap"...
    (do u like this prize winning kad(a)i by a student named Manu.U.ponnan?)



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    rsr (@ 202.*) on: Fri May 30 09:40:49 EDT 2003




    No takers ??




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    S. Subramanian (@ comm*) on: Mon Jun 23 17:36:18 EDT 2003




    Sorry to disappoint. This is not a short story. One of those melodramatic ghost stories trivializing the theme with which the story was started.




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    rajeshrs_tvm (@ 202.*) on: Fri Jun 27 03:02:40 EDT 2003




    s.subramanian ..
    thks for the comment.
    but this cannot be called a short story, the writer actually wanted to make a satire on today's consumerism and advertisements.
    thanks




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    Unmai solbhavan (@ ppp-*) on: Fri Jun 27 13:15:22 EDT 2003




    Pls don't call these sort of scribbles as Short stories,Idhu kadai yum,illai,kadi yum illai,adhaiyum thandiya kuppai.




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    rajeshrs_tvm (@ 61.1*) on: Fri Jun 27 17:04:20 EDT 2003




    yeppaaa..
    aalukku aal rotten eggs-aa paathu moonjeela adikkiraanga
    thaanga mudiyalai..
    mannichurungannaa ..theriyaama post pannittaen





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    Shakthi (@ 203-*) on: Sat Jun 28 03:28:19 EDT 2003




    Unmai solbavan,

    Comments are welcome!
    But too strong comments leads to distaste!

    Shakthi




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    rajeshrs_tvm (@ 61.1*) on: Sat Jun 28 10:23:39 EDT 2003




    shakthi..
    konjam kai kuduthu ezhuppi vida neengalaavadhu vandheengalae..
    nanri..
    naan padichappa romba enjoy pannaen.
    naan thamizhaakkam senjadhulayo alladhu engoyo
    sodhappittaen
    bye




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    sori-Observer (@ cvg-*) on: Sat Jun 28 16:51:44 EDT 2003




    veN padai, sori idhukkellaam indha veN mEga soap pOttu kuLichaa sariyaa pOgumnu ninaikkiRen.




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    a person who thinks this is dumd (@ 1cus*) on: Sat Jun 28 17




    u could have at least wrote the story in english so people could understand it
    not everybody understands ur language




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