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    her fingers draw spiralling swirls upon a striped spread
    and i wonder what joy lies out of her mind's reach
    for her heart is already there
    playing upon the tendrils of the wind
    dipping, dropping, skimming, simply skipping
    along with the dews of rain just rained

    there she is again, searching my eyes, I rather stare at the mould spackling the crumbling ridges of this neglected hall. Why can't I have some peace of mind? I feel, yes maybe pity and even an affectionate exasperation. There are too many expectations that I would rather fufill, uncertainites that I can handle, I work towards them and complete them. This...this I have no clue about. It is but a foolish dare that I refuse to question or pursue, whatever it is, it is merely subjective: she will be on a high, on a low, not on earth. Objectively it will all pass in time.

    her fingers dodge the tears that stain and splotch the spread
    i need no one to tell me that there is no joy where she is
    her heart is sand struggling to become stone
    yet with every beat it crumbles further drawing forth a new tear
    dripping, spattering, inching, tracing its salt trails
    questioning the hope that dies alone and still
    without reason
    yearns
    towards its
    neglected
    home

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    Anbe Sivam

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    Beautiful!!!!!

    Tears - absolutely

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    to you all

    slippery, little, mess
    gasping, acutally rasping
    for air too grey.
    air that too preys...
    upon this snivelling, snip of trivial strife.

    it has no fur, no scales, no skin...
    it has no purpose
    it has no desire
    to thrive all on its own.

    it cannot swim, or fly or attempt to walk
    it just spreads, scatters, slides, slithers
    sealing tiny fates.
    quite silently,
    quite violently,
    but does it matter?

    as a creator what are you to say?
    it's out of my hands
    it out of yours too...
    it's
    out into the world.
    it grows, it crows,
    it continues to show:
    that which we create
    we cannot destroy

    we could try...
    but right here, right now...there is no need for why.
    let it be,
    let us see...
    our lives by then,
    will be but dates
    in some digitized
    archive.

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    Wow! What an ease with phonemes and similar words with perfect meaningful grace! But why the persistent undertone of melancholy?
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.

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    PP Maam thank you for noticing!!!

    i think it's no coincidence that pain and poetry start with the same letter....but truthfully PP Maam...i guess i am just in that kind of thematic mood is all....

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    may i have a insight?
    a glimmering glimpse
    that will once and for all...

    but i am too afraid.

    a number of un-quipped
    questions circle
    the circumference
    of a thought

    i feed it
    italics where it is not even bold
    sugar where it is plainly tasteless
    exclamations where there are only full stops.

    and so i too should stop
    but it is the only thing that allows me to feel safe
    connected to a normalcy that no way is a reality


    i desire a truth
    that will start a beginning
    of what only i want

    i shall never know then.

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    Strange line of imagination and skilful word play!
    Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    may i have a insight?
    a glimmering glimpse
    that will once and for all...
    same feeling :P

    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    but i am too afraid.
    yeah

    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    a number of un-quipped
    questions circle
    the circumference
    of a thought


    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    i feed it
    italics where it is not even bold
    sugar where it is plainly tasteless
    exclamations where there are only full stops.


    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    and so i too should stop
    but it is the only thing that allows me to feel safe
    connected to a normalcy that no way is a reality
    sometimes

    Quote Originally Posted by Querida
    i desire a truth
    that will start a beginning
    of what only i want


    i shall never know then.
    i believe

    PS... enakku purindha vidhaththil eduththukkondEn enakkum porundhugiradhu
    Seven social sins:
    1.Politics without principles
    2.Wealth without work
    3.Pleasure without conscience
    4.Knowledge without character
    5.Commerce without morality
    6.Science without humanity
    7.Worship without sacrifice

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