*VaazhaiVeeran*

[VENKIRAJA]

//SUDHIR ANNA epdi irukenga?!//

Kadhai nalla irunthuchu anna...puthusa,nakaichuvaiya..but one suggestion;neenga ella kahaigalaiyum ore thread-la ezhuthalaame....won't it be better?

anyways super narration!

[Thalafanz]

Another excellent write up...
Keep it up Maddy Bro...

[sarna_blr]

Nice story... logic illaa magic....

Vayasaana thaaththaa bike'la... adhuvum high speed'la... rendu devil dogs'a iluththuttu pOradhu... sema comedy...

Anyway story was enjoyable.... Nice narration...

[MADDY]

Maddy - very nicely narrated

didn't know about the banana trick - should i have know, all the naayigal in my old hometown would have gone reminds me of our episodes with the dogs as young children!

thanks NM.....it actually worked for some guy who narrated his experience in Kumudam

[MADDY]

//SUDHIR ANNA epdi irukenga?!//

Kadhai nalla irunthuchu anna...puthusa,nakaichuvaiya..but one suggestion;neenga ella kahaigalaiyum ore thread-la ezhuthalaame....won't it be better?

anyways super narration!

//i'm fine......doing great//

thanks for the appreciation , yes, i think i'll start writing my stories in one thread

[MADDY]

Another excellent write up...
Keep it up Maddy Bro...

thank you thank you

[MADDY]

Nice story... logic illaa magic....

Vayasaana thaaththaa bike'la... adhuvum high speed'la... rendu devil dogs'a iluththuttu pOradhu... sema comedy...

Anyway story was enjoyable.... Nice narration...

thanks Sarna for ur appreciation ........

ofcourse, indha thaatha saadharana thatha illa.....he is like Indian thatha

[rsubras]

one thing purists wont like in ur stories is the way the story oscillates.... the moment the story touches a serious line, you dilute it with some crazy mohan kinda dialogue

anyway.........that is the kind of stuff i wud like to write as well...but in this particular story....... narration nu illama, motha story ume serious ah illa comedy ah nu theriyaatha maathiri aayiduchi

another thing i noted is, (since nanum antha maathiri panrathunala) usage of IT terms , (viz., "permanent fix" etc.,)

except for the last two paras which takes the sheen off the entire story, the narration is very nice and good

[madhu]

Hi sudhir

nice story. wonderful narration.

[MADDY]

one thing purists wont like in ur stories is the way the story oscillates.... the moment the story touches a serious line, you dilute it with some crazy mohan kinda dialogue

anyway.........that is the kind of stuff i wud like to write as well...but in this particular story....... narration nu illama, motha story ume serious ah illa comedy ah nu theriyaatha maathiri aayiduchi

another thing i noted is, (since nanum antha maathiri panrathunala) usage of IT terms , (viz., "permanent fix" etc.,)

except for the last two paras which takes the sheen off the entire story, the narration is very nice and good

hey thanks for taking time to read and post your comments .......for me, a story should have prominent high points and low points to make it interesting - so it does oscillate........ ......

though words like "permanent fix" are not appropriate words for a old man, it brings the style element in the story - something like a rukmani dance by the oldies in roja .....also, the permanent fix will be used by the grandson and not the grandfather......

honestly, last 2 paras were very tuf for me to write....i wrote the entire story in as much time as i wrote the last 2 ones.........it is a completely visual concept and to bring it in writing was tuf........thats y i checked with Sinthiya, whether it evoked the right visuals in the mind when she read the last 2 paras.........to be frank, even i was not satisfied with the outcome of last 2 paras....

thanks again