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27th March 2008, 11:21 AM
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//SUDHIR ANNA epdi irukenga?!//
Kadhai nalla irunthuchu anna...puthusa,nakaichuvaiya..but one suggestion;neenga ella kahaigalaiyum ore thread-la ezhuthalaame....won't it be better?
anyways super narration!
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27th March 2008 11:21 AM
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27th March 2008, 11:43 AM
#12
Another excellent write up...
Keep it up Maddy Bro...
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27th March 2008, 11:44 AM
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27th March 2008, 05:31 PM
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Originally Posted by
NM
thanks NM.....it actually worked for some guy who narrated his experience in Kumudam
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27th March 2008, 05:36 PM
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Originally Posted by
VENKIRAJA
//SUDHIR ANNA epdi irukenga?!//
Kadhai nalla irunthuchu anna...puthusa,nakaichuvaiya..but one suggestion;neenga ella kahaigalaiyum ore thread-la ezhuthalaame....won't it be better?
anyways
super narration!
//i'm fine......doing great//
thanks for the appreciation , yes, i think i'll start writing my stories in one thread
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27th March 2008, 05:37 PM
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Originally Posted by
Thalafanz
Another excellent write up...
Keep it up Maddy Bro...
thank you thank you
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27th March 2008, 05:38 PM
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Originally Posted by
sarna_blr
thanks Sarna for ur appreciation ........
ofcourse, indha thaatha saadharana thatha illa.....he is like Indian thatha
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29th March 2008, 11:34 PM
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30th March 2008, 03:23 AM
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Hi sudhir
nice story. wonderful narration.
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31st March 2008, 11:15 PM
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Originally Posted by
rsubras
one thing purists wont like in ur stories is the way the story oscillates.... the moment the story touches a serious line, you dilute it with some crazy mohan kinda dialogue
anyway.........that is the kind of stuff i wud like to write as well...but in this particular story....... narration nu illama, motha story ume serious ah illa comedy ah nu theriyaatha maathiri aayiduchi
another thing i noted is, (since nanum antha maathiri panrathunala) usage of IT terms
, (viz., "permanent fix" etc.,)
except for the last two paras which takes the sheen off the entire story, the narration is very nice and good
hey thanks for taking time to read and post your comments .......for me, a story should have prominent high points and low points to make it interesting - so it does oscillate........ ......
though words like "permanent fix" are not appropriate words for a old man, it brings the style element in the story - something like a rukmani dance by the oldies in roja .....also, the permanent fix will be used by the grandson and not the grandfather......
honestly, last 2 paras were very tuf for me to write....i wrote the entire story in as much time as i wrote the last 2 ones.........it is a completely visual concept and to bring it in writing was tuf........thats y i checked with Sinthiya, whether it evoked the right visuals in the mind when she read the last 2 paras.........to be frank, even i was not satisfied with the outcome of last 2 paras....
thanks again
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