Modern Ramayana

[Wibha]

This is the modern Ramayana which I wrote. I am not an experienced writer so I thought of starting with this one. I hope all of you enjoy it. It has a mixture of all languages but mainly written in English and Kannada with tamil,Telugu and Hindi. I hope it's gud

[Wibha]

Characters

RAMA
SITA
Laxmana
Hanuman
Veerappan
Lily(veerappan's Assistant)
Ravana




Ladies and ladas,stop eating your pedas. In the hottest and coldest part of the jungle, not Ram Gopal Verma's jungle, but nature's jungle Rama and Sita Started to mingle. Rama, Sita and LAxman are playing Kho Kho.Sita says Khoand Rama starts running. Suddenly Rama realises that he has lost his way. He goes further and further and he sees a deer. He likes it and says to himself " mm nice deer. Sita will like me a lot if i can get this."The deer was running at a great speed.In the other direction Rama sees a someone walking.

Rama,"yaaru sir neevu?"(who r u sir)

Veerappan "naane kano Veerappan. yean aayithu?" (i am only veerappan.wat happened?)

Rama," I am so scared i lost my way here"

Veerappan"Why fear when veerappan here?"

Rama,"Veerappan here that's why fear sir. sorry"

Veerappan,"Anyways, what brought u here?"

Rama," I got lost while playing Kho Kho and my Airtel does not have signal.That time I saw this beautiful deer so i started chasing it but it's running too fast at the speed of 150 kms/h that I lost track of it."

Veerappan," Lily give him those new Nike shoes."(to rama)," each shoe goes at the speed of 55 kms/h. You can catch it right?"

Rama,"sir laptop tandilla so gothilla sir hidiyakkagatha illava antha"(sir i don't have my laptop so i don't no how to calculate)

Lily"but sir?"

Veerappan" Lily don't be silly. Rama you can make it when u have the determination to catch it. all the best and better get out of my jungle."

Rama," Thank you sir. And I will go out fast."


Meanwhile. Sita and Laxmana are tensed. Sita is annoyed with her cell phone as there is no signal even there.

Sita," Laxmana go look for your brother."

Laxmana,"no atthigea neevu illi ontiyaagi irabaaradhu."(no sister-in-law u cannot stay here alone)

Sita," Laxman he's your brother.Go and search for him"

Laxman," anna will scold me if I leave you alone."

Sita," nanigea yeanu aagalla. Just do as I say."(nothing will happen to me.do as I say)

Laxman'" OK athigea. But one condition."(as u wish)

Sita," What is it?"

Laxman,"yeanu illa. Neevu naanu hakidha laxman Rekha vannu daata baaradhu."(u should not cross the circle of laxman rekha i put around u)

Sita," OK as you say."


to be continued........

[southiecook]

Continue madi...

[Querida]

very amusing...but me need some translation wibha me no know telugu,hindi or kannada...

[Wibha]

ok i'll do that


ll continue wid the story too

[Querida]

haiyya! Thank you very much Wibha

[Wibha]

i put the english translation too

[Wibha]

Sita sits inside the laxman rekha circle singing,"kaanadante maayavaadenu nanna ganda kaanadante maayavaadenu."(a kannada song which tells my husband disappeared). Suddenly she sees Ravana.

Ravana,"naakaooka gir friend kaavaali raa."(yenakkoru girl frnd venumada). He sees Sita and her beauty.

Ravana,"oh sweety oh beauty. neenu obbalae e kaadinalli yeanu maduttidiya?" (oh sweety oh beauty,what r u doing in this forest sitting alone?)

Sita,"Hogo nannannu muttabeada."(go away don't touch me)

Ravana,"Why maam r u the touch-me-not plant?"

Sita'"yes."

Ravana,"no beauty's can escape from me."

Sita,"noooooo kaapaadi kaapaadi naanannu kaapaadi kaapaadi."(save me some one save me).My Laxman Rekha promise is broken.

Ravana,"off u come with me on my ferrarri.It's all for u."


to b continued

[crazy]

wibha

pls keep writing

[southiecook]

Wibha..