Heart To Heart

[Designer]

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My poems will be on Love (Mundane & Divine) and other topics.
The order is random; the poetical pendulum swinging between Materialism and Spiritualism.

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FATE :

Fate is a fishy fellow,
with fickle fingers
not foolish fancies.
his wanton whims
wipe out wondrous joys
wasting them
with whiplashes of worries.

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[Querida]

i liked how all your lines flow but your last line jars...it emphasizes the effect that fate has on happiness... i like alliterative poems...but i also seem to overdo it and therefore just overwhelm the readers..very poignant indeed

[Designer]

Querida : thnx. ya i admit its a bit pessimistic, but its a pointer for ppl who live thinking that life is gonna be a bed of roses - they ought to realize that there are also thorns to bear .

[Designer]

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YOU AND ME

(This is approximate translation of 'Mere Haath Mein' from FANAA)



With my hands entwined in thine
Heaven itself is mine
If You are with Me, who cares for the world
I will destroy myself in your love
If my breath can find your heart's sanctuary
For your love, I will allow my life to destroy

As close as the fragrance of our breath
As close as the rhythm of lips
As together as sleepless memories
As together as our entwined arms
As close as the vision of dreams
So close you must remain oh lover

If you are with me, who cares for the world
I will destroy myself in your love
With my hands entwined in thine
Heaven itself is mine

This night let me cry, let my eyes run dry
Come into my arms, and get drenched in my tears
So that the flood in my heart, can burst forth in rivers
There is so much hurt, that it will drown your heart

As close as the heart's throbs
As close as the monsoon raindrops
As close as the moonlit skies
As close as the mascara of eyes
As close as the waves of the sea
So close you must remain to me

If you are with me, who cares for the world
I will destroy myself in your love
With my hands entwined in thine
Heaven itself is mine

Our breath was incomplete, our heartbeats were incomplete, so were we
But now the moon is at its zenith, and together are you and me
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[sundararaj]

Nice Designs

[Designer]

thnx Sundararaj !

[Wibha]

designer anna

[Designer]

thnx Arshu

[Shakthiprabha.]

cute

[Designer]

thnx SP . i hope to write an original one soon.