Nameless relationship

[rsubras]

Sp Akka

// Raghav u are taking too much stress, is it not time for u
to retire and enjoy the serenity which god has bestowed
bountifully on us"

"hmm yeah sumi... just few more months. I am not old yet u see"

//

Intha edthulle pinneteenga...

well raikko........ intha edathula watz special ?? enakku purilaye

[Raikkonen]

Yarukume puriyama enakku pruijiche athan special..

[bingleguy]

"Dear Raghav..
This is yours..
When I am nomore"

A different start ! Interesting ... A Diary is gonna tell the story !

All the Best Shakthi ! Keep going..... If u r insisting on review comments , will give after few more updations

Continue Maadi ................

[P_R]

I never had the luck to be naive or innocent.
Reema always wore an innocent look.

Well placed sentences. Crisply establishing things.

Reema's words lingered amidst rotis.

The simplicity of the above line paints a more elaborate picture than rest of the chapter

Good start, we hungrily await more.

[Shakthiprabha.]

thanks folks. thansk all.

would write my second episode soon.

thanks again for all ur feedback.

[rachel]

"She died two months before mr.Raghav"

[rami]

SP a gr8 start... So wen is the next ...

[ssanjinika]

A Great start SP.
Def dosent look like u took a break from story writing

[bingleguy]

Looking forward to your next update Shakthi !

[Shakthiprabha.]

PART - 2

"Hello"
"Thats right, whom do u wanna talk to please?"
"yeah its me"

The other line was silent for couple of seconds,

"can I meet u at spencer's today at around 3.00 pm.."
"I shall confirm it to you"
"no. I need to get things clarified u see.."
(sighing) "alright. 3.30 it is. Wait for me"

()

Chennai can be sickeningly hot almost all seasons thro the year.
It was supposedly a mild november morning. Raghav's mind
ironically was very damp. Damp from memories, depressed
with weighing clouds. Eyes were blank not exhibiting any
emotions. Some people leave impressions even after
death. Reema is one of them. Infact she has entered again
in his life, when he assumed she was almost forgotten.

Did he? Could he ever anytime forget her ? She would have
been sleeping quietly in his subconcious mind, only to surface
yet again, this time BRUTALLY.

He had asked his driver to take off for a day and volunteered to drive
himself. He never wanted his sumi to get into any of these chaos.

His Sumi. How innocently unaware she is. Innocence is boon.
Innocence is god's gift. Innocence is bliss. Innocence which
was personified as sumi. Innocence which cheated on him.

He had alwayed loved innocence, for the
lack of its presence in his own life.

Infact it was the same innocence that drove him closer
to Reema. Her innocent looks. It came so close to her,
enveloped in all her looks, eyes, but never entered her
character or attitude. She had fooled quite a lot of them
with those looks and then......and then she would dangerously
unleash her other complicated side. She is too difficult to handle.
Thank god he saved himself.

"I am fortunate" he thought. Without pause he continued to think
"Am I fortunate?"


()

"Hi. How are you."

"Fine thanks. Please sit down."

"Can we order some coffee"

"I prefer something cool. Its hot.. everywhere"

He did not know what to answer.

Cat eyes was shrewdly watching him. Watching his every movement.
He felt very uncomfortable. He could sense those eyes, piercing
deep into him and asking him million unanswered questions.

How could he talk, when there is nothign to talk.
His tongue was tied.

"Ive always dreaded, there is something up her sleeve"

"....."

"So, what has she written to you? Anything personal?"

"That is not ur business young man"

"I happen to be her son"

"...."

"So what is it"

"I cant answer you. Ive not actually started reading"

Tears which tried to blind him, was carefully concealed by his
expensive rayban.

"So..Were u both in love"

"you dont know to beat around the bush, is it not?" smiled Raghav.

"I think it is my right to know"

"No I never wanted to marry her"

He was relieved.

"what about her?"

"She too, never wanted to marry me."

A long silence. Disturbing silence.

"I need to get going, can we catch up some
other time"

Raghav's answer had brought back a spark on his face. Face
was lit and shone bright and charming. This time he genuinely smiled.

"Sure sir. Catch u later" This time, the cat eyes smiled too.

His was shaken at the clarity of his memory.
At 59 years, his memories need not be
so fresh, that too after everything is gone.
He drove to a near by park, sat in a quiet bench. Sat there for hours
with noone to disturb him and shameless tears rolling uncontrollably.

(to be continued)