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    (love) ? kadhali : thozhi (uptd MAY31 - commercial love)

    Namba hero peru shiva.ivaru pathi sollanumna, middle class,above average looks,BE in CSE at a good college.Though he doesnt want to mingle with girls, he has a wish in this heart that he should fall in love with a girl divinely..(all because of tamil movies only).
    Though he had many girls who liked to talk with him... he expected someone who is like like...
    *if u see some girls it will be like someone in Missing advertisements in newspaper.
    *some girls can give effect of kumudham center page.
    *he wants someone like in kumudhams front page.. pattu podava..cute smile.
    whenever he goes to a new place he searches for such girls and try to get their attention.. he thinks himself as an expert in girls and judges their characters.without knowing them he avoids them thinking blah blah abt them.
    though he is not a brilliant student.. he does whatever he needs to.he is now placed in a gud company with lot of freshers.
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    shiva gets ready for office wearing a full hand pink shirt.tucks in and then pulls out a little to hide his little belly.His roommate is karthick who goes to work little early.

    first day at the training..

    he sits in the conference room in the 3rd bench.. keeping his eye on door..as girls started coming in.around 14 girls were there.
    he is didnt find anyone interesting though 4 were very attractive..but he thought they must have been already committed(ivlo gummnu irrukira figura collegeley pasanga vitttuvaipaangla enna) .of course he was jealous of few pairs in his college.
    As always a bald man comes and give the instructions..after an hr.its time for tea and biscuits(software trend).He gets himself introduced with some of his collegues.as usual for attention he avoids girls and stands away from them.
    After tea break.. they went to class rooms with computer for each trainees.
    he sits in oneend...waiting for someone to sit on the othersystem in the desk.
    He goes through some tutorials and goes in for day dreaming..screensaver comes into action.. colour coloura theriyuthu.. he heard some foot steps..and he wakes up and presses Esc key. And saw the floor through the edge of the keyboard.
    A black high heels ..nails with dark pink nail-polish.Light pink salwar embedded small flowers in the same colour.while and pink mixed Dupetta. two notebooks and cute titan watch with brownstrap.Folded white hanky in the hand.small cute under designed handbag.75% fair cute round face..
    avala paatha santhosham varum.. apidi oru azhagaana sirupu


    priya: Hi ,is anybody sitting in that system?(pointing to one near him)
    shiva:No, I cant see anyone sitting here(valiyaatha valiyaatha control..someone said girls like PJs appa irundhu ipidi)
    priyawith a controlled smile) i am priyadarshini, friends call me priya.
    shiva: i am shiva.(he wanted to ask why she didnt attend instruction class,, but kevalama ninaichitaanaa so kept mum)
    priya:i missed the instructions.. did they tell anything important
    shiva:nothing much some basic scripts in UNIX

    shiva: so u r..
    athukulla instructor vanthu class start pannitaaru..

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    to be continued.

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    hey very nice story........... rombave natural flow and simplistic..... keep goin........
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    I am thinking of my past ..When i joined in my company .. Between Kumaran you are that Shiva?

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    Hero per en perna kathai supera than irukkum

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    starting nalla thaan irukku!appuram........................

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sanguine Sridhar
    I am thinking of my past ..When i joined in my company .. Between Kumaran you are that Shiva?
    i have never entered a softwarecompany yet..
    this is just a imagination

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    thanks rsubras.. this is my first attempt.

    NTR.. unga pera irrundhaalum perarasu pathi ithula solla maaten

    crazy.. i knew there are many stories starting like this.. i will try my best to keep it interesting

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    story continued..
    ___________________________________________

    though shiva thinks himself as expert in girls he doesnt talk with freely immediately.he waits for some weeks or even months so that girls can recogonize him as their classmate or collegue.He didnt want to get bulb.

    ****
    at the end of the class..

    shiva:bye..(he even doesnt want to tell her name)
    priya: are you goin home for lunch
    shiva:no here in canteen
    priya: chalo i am also going there. we will have it together
    shivahesistates)
    ingaoru flashback
    /*
    tenth padikum bothu oru ponnu kuda sethuvachu ota aarambitchutaanga.. antha ponnu ivan pakkuthu veetla irrundhuchi
    he didnt have anyfeelings for her when she was around her(he was a gud guy at that time.. he was not allowed to see alaiypayuthey at that time by his father)..later she left for another house...
    apavum friends kindal panna..
    payan tamil songs keka aarambitchaan..naasama pochi..
    some samples..
    kil imai naan mel imai nee.. piranthathillai kanne kanne
    kil imai nee pirinthathinaal purinthu kondaen kadhal endrey

    7 G rainbow colony padam paathu aluthu case-la ivanum onnum.

    later he heard some friends that she was roaming with some other guy.. payan nondhu nool aayetaan.but he got better marks in 12th.
    he is a practical learner.. so he gave no space for such rumours in his college life.
    */

    priya: enna girl friends yaarachi kupitaangala
    shiva: che che athellam illai.. k.. come on lets go.(he thought he has grown mature enough to handle any rumours)
    (while walking...)
    priya: nee vegetariana.. non-vegetariana
    shivanayagan kamal stylaa) theriyiley pa
    priyastarted laughing..(this time comfortably)) sollu shiva
    shiva:non veg thaan
    priya: appadi.. chicken saapida company irruku.

    canteen boardla(Only Veg)
    shivapriya paathu lighta siruchaan)
    priya: sirikaathey.. menu paaru
    shiva: kesari bath,bisebellabath,ricebath,masaladosai
    priyaconfused) bath bathu solraanga
    shivavivek voicela)ada paavigala..mathiyaanathula masala dosai podraanga
    priyalaughs)i will take curdrice and 2 vada
    shiva: naanum athey solluraen

    they get it and sit in a table.. shiva brings in water.

    priya:hey did u notice! naanum pink neeyum pink.
    shiva: naan konjam karuppu
    priya: ada che naan shirta sonnaen
    shiva: adhuku
    priya:same sweet
    shiva: apideena..(he knows whats that still)
    priya: naan sonna naala enaku choclate vaangi tharanum
    shiva: kadavuleee

    shiva thinks ennada homely figurunu paathu intha maathiri kalaaikuraa.. oru velaa naama misjudge paniirrupomo.
    ivala purinjikavey mudiyilaiye.. innum entha oorunu kuda kekala.. athukula choclate kekuraa
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    next priya side yenna yosikkuthu paapom

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    Hmmm appram?

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    unga kadha hero nalla charactera irukkar, ana nijathila edhana per ippadir irukkanga?
    anyway story seems good so far!

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