Complications

[sarna_blr]

Nilai maarum ulagil.... nilaikkum endra kanavil :P

[Shakthiprabha.]

[P_R]

Thank You Wibha. You dug up something more than 3 years old !!

Sarna, mAtram onRE ulaga niyadhi aagum

SP, Happy Endings are too imaginative, aren't they ?

[Wibha]

Thank You Wibha. You dug up something more than 3 years old !!

Sarna, mAtram onRE ulaga niyadhi aagum

SP, Happy Endings are too imaginative, aren't they ?

vera velai?

I loved the narration. Bamm Bamm Bamm.... and the end.. short and crisp

[madhu]

twist in the tail :P

[P_R]

Thank You Wibha and Madhu.
Glad you enjoyed it.

[Roshan]

Kumudam oru pakka kathai mAthiri irunthuchu But twist koncham ottAtha mAthiri oru feel Twist'kaaga kathai enguRa mAthiri

[Shakthiprabha.]

I agree with roshan, a feel similar to stuffing hasty lyrics to fit in a wellcomposed tune.

Or just may be, we expect much more from PR

[P_R]

Thank you Roshan and SP.
I will hide behind the fact that I wrote the first draft when I was in college.
I admit, the twist holds a lot in the overall impact of the story.
The original idea was to write a longer story with multiple parallel threads each with such reversals due to unsaid 'complications' inbetween left to the readers' inference. adhu avvaLavu sariyA varalainnu vittuttEn.

[btr]

good one! short and crisp. totally unexpected , filmy ending.
On second thoughts why not attempt to write in detail of your earlier (college days) conception of the now short story?

hope to read more!