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24th October 2007, 09:26 AM
#231
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two creatures
tethered
stalk each other
one brutalizer
one brutaled
one beater
one beaten
one's monstrosity
spins in angrish violence
the other's
pitiying crime
believes its fate
deserved....
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24th October 2007 09:26 AM
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24th October 2007, 06:33 PM
#232
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Anbe Sivam
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25th October 2007, 06:51 AM
#233
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Hi Crazy
just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
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25th October 2007, 07:24 AM
#234
Senior Member
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*re-sound de sounds*
al-one-ways
di-vide-dee-di-vine
sub-mergeds in germed-suds
v-ainit-y aint vit v-anity
dul-drums um drul-dums
sin-sear-city, sin-scar-ity
found fou und fond
be-leave-ebbs-by-lies-be-sott-by-be-très-all
ad-ditch-shun...add-is-sham
al-one-ways
fyi
*und - and in deutsch
*très - very in francais
*re-sound de sounds*
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25th October 2007, 09:15 AM
#235
Senior Member
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Interesting, meaningful, poetic experiments!
Eager to watch the trends of the world & to nurture in the youth who carry the future world on their shoulders a right sense of values.
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25th October 2007, 12:02 PM
#236
Senior Member
Diamond Hubber
Originally Posted by
Querida
Hi Crazy
just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so
Anbe Sivam
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26th October 2007, 10:27 PM
#237
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Originally Posted by
crazy
Originally Posted by
Querida
Hi Crazy
just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so
Speechless!! That good!!
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26th October 2007, 10:38 PM
#238
Senior Member
Diamond Hubber
Originally Posted by
chevy
Originally Posted by
crazy
Originally Posted by
Querida
Hi Crazy
just was curious what prompted the little emoticon you posted...was it pertaining to the meaning of either of the poems or was it my use of french?
nice poems...wasnt sure, how to express ..so
Speechless!! That good!!
wordless ..maybe
Anbe Sivam
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29th October 2007, 06:27 AM
#239
Senior Member
Seasoned Hubber
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