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Topic started by ¸¾¢÷ - Kathir (@ 212.138.47.26) on Thu Feb 19 05:46:43 EST 2004.


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Kathir,
I too am hardly moved by poems that depicts love and separtation, but yours is a beautiful one... more realistic! especially the 3rd stanza,

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ÁȾ¢§Â¡, ÁÃòÐô §À¡¾§Ä¡,
þÃñʦġýÚ ÓóÐõ ŨÃ.

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>>ÁȾ¢§Â¡, ÁÃòÐô §À¡¾§Ä¡,
þÃñʦġýÚ ÓóÐõ ŨÃ.>>

Sooper!

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BTW, what happened to the link for Sudhakar's "Snehithikku' poem?

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Something seems to have gone wrong in the web page today.. Let us wait if it gets corrected.

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Yes! soemthing is wrong. I got this thread through a google search! I had to do the same for geno's "thala puraaNam". But unabe to get Sudhakar's "Snehidhikku"

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±ý ¸ñ¸Ç¢ø þô§À¡Ð ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý ®Ãõ!

µ! ¸¾¢÷...

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Kathir,

indha kavidhaigal pakam kaanama ponapo nenaichen--ungaloda indha kavidhaiku comments eludhalayenu..now i have a chance, i just dont know what to write...

) )

just that i agree with Suresh, pg, Roshan, Sudhakar and Geno in everything they have said...


[ apadaa..velai easy-a mudinchuthu!! ) ) ]

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¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾È¾¡ø ¿¡õ ¯½÷źôÀ¼§È¡Á¡ «ýÈ¢, ¯½÷źôÀ¼ ÓÊž¡ø ¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾§È¡Á¡ - ¦¾Ã¢Â¨Ä. I was emotional today, when I found the Kavithai thread has come out of its coma, and then when I read Geno's review. Thanks. And my gratitutude to everyone, including Malligai whose cheerful inspiration is invaluable to me.