My first attempt at Tamizh Poetry

[Badri]

My very first attempt at Tamizh poetry. Pizhai irunthaal (etharkku irunthaal, irukkum) mannikkavum.

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À¼÷ó¾ ¬¨Äò¨¾ì ¸ñÎ, Åɧ¾Å¢ Å¢ÉŢɡû:
§Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 §Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ ¿¢Æø «Ç¢ò¾Å§É,
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«íÌ ¬ð¸Ù째 þø¨Ä §Å¨Ä,
þíÌ ¬Ö즸ýÉ §Å¨Ä
±ýÚ Å£úò¾¢É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼

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«ÃºÛõ þø¨Ä, «ÈÓõ þø¨Ä, «ÃºÁÃõ ÁðÎõ ±¾÷즸ýÚ
Å£úò¾¢¾É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼

Åɧ¾Å¢ Å¢ÉŢɡû:
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Á¨ÄÂÅÙìÌ ¯¸ó¾ ¸üÀ¸§Á
Òò¾¡ñ¨¼ò ÐÅ츢 ¦ÅöìÌõ §Åõ§À
¯ý ¸Å¨Ä ¾¡ý ±ýÉ?


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Á¨ÄÁ¸¨Ç Á¨Ä¡¸ ¦ÅÚõ ¸øÄ¡¸ì ¸¡ñÀ÷
Å£úò¾¢¾É÷ ±ýÉŨÃ,
¿¡ý ÁðÎõ À¢¨Æò§¾ý, ÅóÐû§Çý ӨȢ¼

§¸ð¼¡û ÅÉ «Ãº¢ §¸ð¼ À¢ý ÜȢɡû:
ӨȢ¼ Åó¾Å÷¸¨Ç Өȡ¸ì §¸ð§¼ý
¿¡ý ¦º¡øÖõ Å¡÷ò¨¾Ôõ §¸ûÁ¢ý
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þíÌ Åɧ¾Å¢§Â ÅÉò¨¾ §¾Î¸¢È¡û
¯í¸û ̨Ȩ ±ýÉ¢¼õ ӨȢðË÷
±ý ÌȨ ¡â¼õ Üڧŧɡ?

[madhu]

†¡ö Àòâ !

¿øÄ ¸ÕòÐ...

À¢¨Æ þÕìÌõ ±ýÚ ´ôÒì ¦¸¡ûÅÐ ¯í¸û ¾ýɼì¸ò¨¾ì ¸¡ðθ¢ÈÐ.
¦À¡Õû ÌüÈõ þÕôÀ¢ý ±ó¾ ¿ì¸£ÃáÅÐ ÅóÐ ±ÎòÐî ¦º¡øÄ¢ Å¢ÎÅ¡÷..
¬É¡ø ¬í¸¡í§¸ ¯ûÇ ±ØòÐô À¢¨Æ¸¨Ç
¿£í¸§Ç ¾Â× ¦ºöÐ ºÃ¢ ¦ºöРŢÎí¸§Çý !

¯¾¡Ã½ò¾¢üÌ,

"¦Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 ¦Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ "
±ýÀ¨¾
"¦ÁªÉò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 ¦ÁªÉ ÌÕÅ¢üÌ" ±ý§È¡
"§Á¡Éò¨¾ Å¢Ç츢 §Á¡É ÌÕÅ¢üÌ" ±ý§È¡
Á¡üÈÄ¡õ.

BTW, ¿¡§É ´Õ «¨Ą̃Ⱦ¡ý.. «¾É¡ø ±ý¨Éò ¾¢ð¼¡¾£í¸ ! :P

[Badri]

ÁÐ «Å÷¸§Ç: Á¢ì¸ ¿ýÈ¢. Á¡üÈ¢ Å¢ð§¼ý.

þ-¸Äô¨À¢ø ¼Â¢ô ¦ºöŧ¾ ´Õ ¸¨Ä. þ¾¢ø ±ý ¾Á¢ú spelling §ÅÚ! «¾É¡ø ¾¡ý ¿¡ý ¦ÅÌÅ¡¸ ¾Á¢Æ¢ø ¼Â¢ô ¦ºöž¢ø¨Ä.

besides, it take so much time. It took me more time to type this poem than to actually think and write it!!!

[temporary sori-Observer]

Àòâ, ¸¡ïÍô§À¡É ÁæÁøÄ¡õ, À¡ þÕì¸ ÁÃò¨¾ô À¡òÐ ¬Ú¾ø «¨¼Ôõ. «ó¾ ÀÍÁçÁ ¦ÅðÎôÀð¼¡, ¸¡ðÎÁÃí¸û ±øÄ¡õ «Ðí¸ ¸Å¨Ä¦Â Åɧ¾Å¨¾ ¸¢ð¼ ӨȢÎí¸. ¬É¡ Åɧ¾Å¨¾§Â ¸Äí¸¢ ¿¢ýÉ¡ «ó¾ò§¾Å¨¾ìÌ Â¡Ã¡¦Ä ¬Ú¾ø ¦º¡øÄ ÓÊÔõ?

http://www.raaga.com/channels/tamil/movie/T0000222.html

[pavalamani pragasam]

Wow! Àòâ, Á¢¸×õ «Õ¨ÁÂ¡É ¸Å¢¨¾; ¿øÄ ¸ÕòÐȢ×! À¢¨Æ¸¨Çô ÀüÈ¢ «ÄðÊ즸¡ûÇ¡¾£÷¸û! þÐ ±ýÉ ÀûÇ¢ìܼÁ¡, ¿¡í¸û À¢Ãõ§À¡Î ¿¢üÌõ Å¡ò¾¢Â¡÷¸Ç¡? ¦º¡øÄ Åó¾Ð Òâó¾Ð, «Ð §À¡Ðõ ±ýÀÐ þì¸¡Ä ÒÐ communication era's concept. ±ô§À¡Ð "¸Å¢¨¾ìÌ ¸Å¢¨¾" ¾¢Ã¢ìÌ ÅóÐ ¸Äì¸ô§À¡¸¢È£÷¸û?

[Badri]

¾ðÎò ¾ÎÁ¡È¢ þô§À¡ ¾¡ý §Â¦¾¡ ±Ø¾Â¢Õ째ý...«ÐìÌûÇ, ¿£í¸ §ÅÈ PP Madam!!

By the way, ellam, ungal kili pechhin inspiration thaan

[xlntbarani]

...
¯í¸û ̨Ȩ ±ýÉ¢¼õ ӨȢðË÷
±ý ÌȨ ¡â¼õ Üڧŧɡ?

¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ þó¾ ¸Å¢Ãº... ÒÄõÀø...

¦¸¡ïºõ... «ÄõÀÖõ ܼ....
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TSO ... ²ý ±ô¦À¡ØÐõ.. ±ý ¿¢¨É׸Ǣø þÕ츢ȡ÷Û ¾¡ý ¦¾Ã¢ÂÅ¢ø¨Ä...

[malligai]

Badri,

idhu nejamaavey unga mudhal attempt-a, sollunga??..bcos most of us write only 4-5 lines in our first attempt...aana neenga oru periya kaaviyamey eludhi irukeenga...

nala iruku...innum neraya eludhunga...

//ÁçÁ¡ «øÄÐ ÁÕ󧾡 ±ýÚ ¸ºó¾¡Öõ «ÕÁÕó¾¡ö Å¢ÇíÌÀŧÇ
Á¨ÄÂÅÙìÌ ¯¸ó¾ ¸üÀ¸§Á //---very nice lines..

[Badri]

Malligai: Nejamave mudhal attempt thaan...

ithula kasthapatta apparam, maru attempt irukkumane doubt!!

Thanks much for the appreciation!

[madhu]

ithula kasthapatta apparam, maru attempt irukkumane doubt!!

achachO !

appadi ellaam ninaikka kUdaadhu !
evvalvu nalla theme solli irukkeenga !
kaNdippa ezhudhunga !

ungaLaal mudiyum ! :P