Penned by a novice

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Topic started by Cygnus (pg) (@ cavalier250.is.temple.edu) on Sat Apr 3 19:47:47 EST 2004.


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how beautifully narrated!! especially, the crisp narration of the inevitable routine // «Å÷¸û þÅ÷¸û ±ýÚ ÀðÊÂø §À¡ðÎ þÂó¾¢Ãò¾ÉÁ¡ö ¯È׸û ÒÐôÀ¢òÐ.. // hats off.

'penned by a novice' enbathu mattumey thevaiyaRRathu. u seem really good, as such.

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¸¾¢÷ ¦º¡øÅÐ ºÃ¢§Â!

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Å¡ú¸! ÅÇ÷¸! :=)

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PP, ¸¾¢÷, geno, ¿ýÈ¢¸û ÀÄ ! Ò¾¢Â ÓÂüº¢¦ÂýÀ¾¡ø 'novice' ±ýÚ ÜȢ즸¡ñ§¼ý. þíÌûÇ À¨¼ôÀ¡Ç¢¸Ç¢ý Óý ±ÉÐ ±Øò¾¡üÈø ¸òÐìÌðÊìÌî ºÁ§Á. ¸õÀ£ÃÓñÎ ¸÷ÅÁ¢ø¨Ä !

PS: I have changed my handle to "Cygnus", I guess my springwell of imaginative nom de plumes was quite dry at the time I thught of the previous one

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Cygnus,
Very good attempt !! As geno said, ¿£í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾¢Â§À¡§¾ ¸Å¢»É¡¸¢Å¢ðË÷¸û! Å¡÷ò¨¾¸û À¢Ã¾¢ÀÄ¢ìÌõ 'ÅÄ¢' - ¨Â ±ýÉ¡ø ¿ýÈ¡¸§Å ÒâóЦ¸¡ûÇ ÓÊó¾Ð. ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ÓÂüº¢òÐ ¿¢¨È ±ØÐí¸û!

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À¡¨ÄÔõ ¿£¨ÃÔõ À¢Ã¢òÐ, À¡¨Ä ÁðÎõ «ÕóЦÁýÚ ¦º¡øÅ¡÷¸§Ç.. «ó¾ «ýÉô ÀȨŨ ¿¢¨ÉòÐ ¿£í¸û unga 'nom de plume' §¾÷× ¦ºö¾¢ÕôÀ¢ý ¿øÄ §¿¡ì¸õ.

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ooobss... penned by a novice ?

i doubt... ( may be in forum hub . right ? )

Á¢¸ ¿ýÈ¡¸ ÅóÐûÇÐ pg... ¦¾¡¼Õí¸û...

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Roshan, Suresh, Thank you ! Thodarnthu ezhutha muyarchikkirEn.

Kathir, I chose "Cygnus" based on the constellation by the same name, being the astronomy dabbler that I am. But your explanation is beautiful, copyright paNNalenna athai use- paNNIkkalAmA ?!! hehe !

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Yeah, cygnus, by all means. i saw those two meanings, but guessed (wrongly) that you'd've chosen the one i mentioned. anyway, happy. it's a great name.