thiruththakkan thiri

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suresh,
What I like the most is the candidness with which you make your statements. There is absolutely no issues with your understanding. Poetry is very subjective. What seems like a poem to you may not be of my taste and vice versa.
But, a Parimelazhagar is needed to put new dimensions for understanding and feeling. Otherwise a Thirukural would not be so interesting as it is now.
The styles differ from person to person and the challenge is to appreciate the inner feelings of the poet and the poem.

Your comments are very lively and your padivam type of poetry ( no 11) is an example of your taste..
Anpudan
srimangai

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sudhakar,
>> Poetry is very subjective. What seems like a poem to you may not be of my taste and vice versa. >>

You are correct 100% and for that matter any kind of 'Art' is subjective.

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suresh,

no offence meant.you are one of the few people who have been consistently evaluating my work.so carry on the way you do.with what sudhakar has said, i stand corrected to the extent that there is a joy in understanding a poem straight but surely there is another kind of joy when a parimelazhagar leads you there.NOTHING AT ALL IS WRONG.
for the purpose of evaluation,if you could give your view on the basis of your appreciation or otherwise,that will be a great feedback!THANKS A LOT COMING BACK WITH FRANK RESPONSE.

TIRUTTAKKAN

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tk,

That poetry was like reading a short-story!

Amazing story inside poetic shell...

goodluck

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shakthi,
thanks.did u say i should have posted it in the story section!?
pp,
nothing to celebrate as yet.consolation could be that i don't subscribe to the proverb taking a dig at women!
sudhaakar,
well.we are developing a lot of mutual respect for each other's poems.hope this will not bias our critical acclaim.when u don't like my poem, i am sure u'll say so.
suresh,
thanks.
thiruththakkan

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Hello TT,
I would not hesitate to praise something if it is really good. It is easy to criticize the "so called grey areas" - which actually would be the gap in understanding and feeling what is read and what is written. I would tread with a bit of caution and self introspection when something has not given an impact. Please be assured from me - I would ask for a clarification if I have not felt a poetry in your words. Please keep up the good work. This is one place where one can read REAL poetry... Iam not sure of my contribution - hope I have done something!( no avaiyadakkam.. only a cautious pessimism!)
anpudan
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