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7th November 2004, 09:36 AM
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Topic started by akil (@ 61.1.202.139) on Fri May 28 09:29:40 EDT 2004.
My underground - tube train - experience.. in London -forms the backdrop of this kavithai
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«Á÷óÐ þÕ츢§Èý Üð¼ò¾¢ø '¾É¢Â¡¸'.
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§Àîͦ¸¡ÎòÐ ¿¢ýÈÐ "MIND THE GAP!"
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The theme (i think) of the poem is "Mind the Gap".
Its a common term that u will hear in london tube trains.. because there will be gap between train and platform at some stations.. asking the passengers to be careful..
I used this in the context of "manithargalukku idayil ulla idaivali".. thats why, i feel like being alone even in a big crowd in the train....
In this modern world we communicate less with our fellow human beings.. and just get involved in net, music, tv, media, newspapers, novels (novel reading is a very common practice here in trains.. may be anywhere inthe west, i would presume)......
So, iam just asking the humanbeings (reader) to notice this gap that has arisen between us!
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7th November 2004, 09:36 AM
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geno (@ 61.1*) on: Fri May 28 09:35:14 EDT 2004
Dear akil,
I took the extreme rights of you, by starting your kavithaikaL thread for you - since you are always "sAkku sollifying" for your laziness!!!
I have posted one of the most poignant of your kavithai - that i loved the most, here!
Friends,
Akil - is a great and expressive poet who is always reluctant to open a separate thread for his kavithaikaL, since his affection and love for our home "ulagam enbathu ethanai pEr?" - makes him think that he should not post any of his kavithai outside of ulagam thread!!
I wanted him to open a separate thread and post all of his lovely works here in kavithaikaL section.
Now that he has a separate thread, i hope he would post all his poetry work here too for the benefit of all our friends!
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akil (@ gtw-*) on: Fri May 28 12:37:41 EDT 2004
Geno!
i'm wordless. thanks yaar.
hope i meet ur expectations and keep up!
suresh!
thannadakkam enbathellaam enakku theriyaathu. i always feel proud for what i am and often for even what not i am!
self coined nick of my own is 'jambam jaambavan', which one of my closest friends knows as well!
now back to my duty:
i wanted my collections to be called as
"EN KARAIYIL OTHUNGIYA SIPPIKAL"!
±ý ¸¨Ã¢ø ´Ðí¸¢Â º¢ôÀ¢¸û
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«Äí¸¡ÃÁ¡?
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I will try to post here some of my college day kirukkals as well, which will date back to late 90s and try to record some incidents what led me to write them!
see u again!
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Roshan (@ 159.*) on: Fri May 28 12:54:33 EDT 2004
Wow! good to see a 'special' thread for '¸Å¢ Ó¸¢Äý' «¸¢Äý's works ! Thanks to geno for starting up this thread. Even in my list of Akil's work - 'Mind the Gap' comes first! þó¾ Ó¸¢ÄÉ¢ý ¸Å¢ Á¨Æ¢ø ±ø§Ä¡Õõ þÉ¢ ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ¿¨ÉÂÄ¡õ!
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Kathir (@ cach*) on: Fri May 28 16:28:10 EDT 2004
¿ýÈ¢ ¦§É¡.
// i always feel proud for what i am and often for even what not i am! // ú¢ì¸ ¨Å츢ȣ÷¸û, «¸¢ø. ¾Â× ¦ºöÐ ¦¾¡¼÷óÐ ¯í¸û ¸Å¢ µÅ¢Âí¸û ¿¢¨È þíÌ þÎí¸û.
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Pavalamani Pragasam (@ 220.*) on: Fri May 28 23:44:17 EDT 20
"Å¢¨Ä ¦¸¡ÎòÐ Å¡í¸¡¾ ¸¢Ç¢ïºø¸û
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¬¡! «Õ¨ÁÂ¡É Åâ¸û! ¸¼ü¸¨ÃìÌ §À¡É¡§Ä º¢ôÀ¢, ºíÌ ¦À¡ÚìÌÅÐ ±ýÈ ¾£Å¢ÃÁ¡É ¨Àò¾¢Âõ ¸¢ÆŢ¡ÉÀ¢ýÛõ ¦¸¡ïºÓõ ̨ÈÂÅ¢ø¨Ä!Å£ð椀 ´Õ ¸¦Ä§É þÕ츢ÈÐ!!! ¯Â¢ÕûÇ þÃ𨼠º¢ôÀ¢¸¨ÇÔõ Å¢ðÎ ¨ÅôÀ¾¢ø¨Ä- ¸¡Âô §À¡ðÎ(º¢Ú ¯Â¢÷¸¨Ç ¦¸¡øÖõ ¯Úò¾¦ÄøÄ¡õ þø¨Ä!), Å¢Ã¢ó¾ º¢ôÀ¢¸¨Ç ±ý Á¸û ¾ý ¸üÀ¨É ÅÇò§¾¡Î º¡÷ð §ÀôÀâø ´ðÊ, ¿¡ý À¡¼õ Àñ½¢ ¨Åò¾¢ÕìÌõ §¾¡ð¼òÐ º¢Ú âì¸û ¦¸¡ñ¼ ¸¨Çʸ¨ÇÔõ §º÷òÐ, «Õ¨Á¡¸ Åñ½õ ¾£ðÊ «Æ¸¡É Å¡úòÐ «ð¨¼ ¾Â¡Ã¢òРŢÎÅ¡û!
¿¢ü¸! ¯ÅÁ¡Éò¨¾ ÀüÈ¢ ¯ÇÈ¢ì ¦¸¡ñ§¼ þÕ측Áø «Æ¸¡É ¾ýÉ¢¨Ä (±ýÉÐõ ܼ!) Å¢Çì¸ò¨¾ À¡Ã¡ðθ¢§Èý!
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k.sudhakar(srimangai) (@ ppp-*) on: Sat May 29 03:20:30 EDT
akil,
«Õ¨ÁÂ¡É Åâ¸û... ŨÃŦ¾ýÀÐ º¢ÄÕ째 º¡ò¾¢Âõ. ¿£í¸û ŨÃó¾ÅüÈ¢ø º¢Ä Ò¾¢Â §¸¡½í¸û ¸¡ñ¸¢§Èý...geno, þó¾ º¢ôÀ¢¸û ÌȢ£θÙìÌ ¿øÄ ¯¾¡Ã½õ.. ÀÄ ¾¡ì¸í¸¨Ç ²üÀÎò¾¢ÔûÇ£÷¸û «¸¢ø.. ¿ýÈ¢ ÀÄ. §ÁÖõ ÀÄ º¢ôÀ¢¸¨Ç ±¾¢÷À¡÷츢§Èý. ÓòÐ츨Çô ÀüÈ¢ «ôÒÈõ §Â¡º¢ì¸Ä¡õ - º¢ôÀ¢¸§Ç þíÌ «Ã¢¾¡¸ô§À¡É ¿¢¨Ä¢ø...
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akil (@ gtw-*) on: Sat May 29 10:38:10 EDT 2004
kathir and sri,
thanks for being so kind towards me!
wherever i go, i get to find good people around. i thought its my 'muga raasi'. but in internet..?!
roshan!
ennai neengaLum genovum sErnthu nalla maatividareenga! irunga, enakkum oru kaalam varum.
PP
ungalukku 'sagalakalAvalliyaar' enRu thaan pattam kodukka vEnum. thaay puli 8 enraal, sEy puli 16 ah?!
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akil (@ gtw-*) on: Sat May 29 10:44:31 EDT 2004
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