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yaaz thamiz
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3.7.3

yaazh koNdu seytha isaiyE
vaazhn themmai vaLartha varamE
nool koNdu neytha azhagE
oonodu kalantha ooNE amuthE
thEn kaNda naavin suvaiyE
kEL engaL thaayE thamizhE
thee theendum pOthum karugaai -
nee engaL agathin niRamE!

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thamizannai
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PS: I remember writing this, when I heard a temple was erected for 'Tamil'annai in karaikaal(?) - imagining how She would look like with all those literatures like 'aimperungkaapiyam' as her ornaments with all the sangpulavar around Her - adoring Her beauty.!

PS 2: When i was referring the diary pages, i noticed that i had used 'thamizazagan' as my nick for this work. As I have mentioned to some of u before, I used to use 'kanchi' (the town where i hail from) as my nick for most of works in my college days.

PS 3: My anna took this poem, a year or so later and published in his college magazine on my behalf.

yaaz thamiz
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PS: i think punnahai liked this one, when posted in friendship thread

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additional notes:

1. recently we are not allowed to write more than few sentences in one post, in forumhub. its a big check on 'wide mouth'ers like me!

2. i intend to post here few of my college day works and the ones written recently over the last year in forumhub. b'cos i'm lazy to write new ones so frequently and i will reserve them for ulagam thread, for now.

3. i thought i start with thamiz thaai vaazthu, keeping up our tradition

(PS: ungalukku kashta kaalam thaan?!)

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akil,
kashta kaalame nalla irukkkaiyil nalla kaalam patri aen kavalaipadap pokiRoam?! arumaiyaana kavithaikaL. Maelum ezuthungkaL.
I remember writing poetry in my 10th std and then metamorphosizing into an iconoclast. Some rewards I got for that...( I have mentioned about that in one of the earlier thread!!!).
Expecting more from you.
with regards
srimangai

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akil,
yaaz tamiz is pretty emotional.i refrain from grading it in terms of marks,on purpose.
good luck.

thituththakkan

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sri and kathir
thanks

pp
thanks. ungaL paarvaikku ulagam thiriyil, oru kavithai ittirunthEn. i think it got drowned in the flood. u might be able to find it a few pages back

thiru
?!

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suresh!
about that amateur work,
as i said in the postscript notes, i see Goddess tamil's idol in my imagination. i see:
avaL kaalgaLil kaaviyach silambu. azagu aabaththaaNathu, athanaal bayamuRuthum. appadi KiLipOl kili seykiRa, kinnammathiriyaana avaL idaiyil maNimEgalai. keerathanaar, keerar (nakkeerar) poNdra pulavargaL(keerar - aagupeyar) avaLarugil. kundru pOl pugaz koNda kuNdalakEsi avaL kaathugalil. natarajan mainthan kumaranin vEl pOl koormai koNdu avaL vizigaL.
i also see a lot of literatures adorning her:
keNdai meenukkE azagai sollik kodukkum piRar manathai kedukkiRa vizigal konda pEnkalin azagai sollum kavigal. kENmai porunthiya kuRaL.