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TT,
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TT,
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ÀðÊÂø ¾¢Õò¾õ : «Æ¸¢Â ¸Å¢¨¾...but the end seems a little
'unattached' to the start...
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ŢƢò¾ þýÚ º¢ó¾¢ò§¾ý.
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¦¿ïºõ ¦º¡ýÉÐ. //---yess, reality is mundane...
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SuresSh,
heyy, enga kaanama poiteenga, idhanai naala??... :D
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Thanks Malligai!
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hi thiru,
thaangal yenathu kavithaigalukku alikkum vimarsanam yennai kavithai yeluthuvathai uukkappaduthuvathaaga illai...nalla vimarsanam yenpathu kavithai yeluthum aarvathai thuunduvathaagavum thavarina thiruthikkolla innum kuurmai paduthikkolla uthavuvathaahavum irukka vaendum..aanaal thangal vimarsanam yaenoo thaanoovendru "poohira pookkil" alatchiyamaaga solvathu poola amaihirathu...thayavu seithu thangal vimarsana murayai maatrikkondu puthithaaga yelutha varuvoorai uukkappaduthungal. thamil kavithai yeluthuvatharkkendrae yaarum thaniyaaga pirakkavillai.
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Hello Gautham,
I am not writing this only to support TT. but, I have some views on what you have said about his comments. If you dont mind, may I share my views also?
1. Vimarisanam enpathu ippadiththaan irukkavaendum enpathillai. When we demand democracy in poetry we should also be prepared to embrace the democratic views of those who read and comment.
Very rarely people read poetry. It is still a rare specimen who write a commentry on what is written. If you look at the no.of postings and no of feedback on them, you can see by yourself. Knowing TT's expertise and his unbiased views , in the forum we have a respect for his "no nonsense " expressions. I am not saying that he is above anyone. But, only that his merits have to be given due consideration. Can you pls try to have a paradigm shift in looking into what he has tried to share? Just a suggestion. Pls do not take othewise.
2. We all respect for what is written and what is said on what is written. No one here ( as of I know) has any intention to disparage other's poetry. With my experience in Forum, I have not felt so far, that some one has carelessly passed any comment. No one has time for it and there is no obligation on anyone to write a comment.
If you like - if you want to express - you are free to do so. If you do nt like something- you are free to say that. Many a times I have got TT's comments on my poems like" paravayillai" and just "45 marks" etc. That tells me what he feels as a reader. May be , there is an element which needs more appeal and I need to work on it.
These criticsms, Gautham, are much more genuine , powerful and pragmatic for us to sharpen. Encouragement does not rest in eulogies - this is my humble thought.
anpudan
srimangai
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hi sri,
ungal vilakkathirkku nanri...
vimarsanam yaar vaendumaanaalum yeluthalaam..yeppadi vaendumaanaalum yeluthalaam..aanaal intha forumil vetti arattai adippavargalin vimarsanathai patri naan kurai sollavillai, naan mihavum yethirpaarkkum mathikkum manitharin vimarsanam innum nallavithamaaga innum "naalu vaarthai" athigam saerthu nirai kuraigalai suttuvathaaga irunthaal nallathu yenru thaan solluhiraen..ithai purinthu kondaal pothum...iniyum vilakka vaendaam..ithudan ivvivaatham mudiyattum
nanri
anbudan,
Gautham
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Hi Gautham,
I respect your views. Thanks.
anpudan
srimangai