Suresh !!!!!
After a long time we now feel a gust of fresh air of laughter and merry in Forum Hub!!
Anyway, TT has deigned to give me some more marks in my next poem Å¢¸¡Ã ±ñ½õ.(Å£ðÎìÌ ¬ð§¼¡ «ÛôÀ¢Õ§ÅóÛ Á¢ÃðÊÉÐìÌ «ôÒÈõ )
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Suresh !!!!!
After a long time we now feel a gust of fresh air of laughter and merry in Forum Hub!!
Anyway, TT has deigned to give me some more marks in my next poem Å¢¸¡Ã ±ñ½õ.(Å£ðÎìÌ ¬ð§¼¡ «ÛôÀ¢Õ§ÅóÛ Á¢ÃðÊÉÐìÌ «ôÒÈõ )
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Óõ¨À측Ã÷¸ÙìÌ ¾¡¾¡ Á¢Ãð¼ø¾¡§É ¦¾Ã¢Ôõ Madam?! ¿£í¸ ´ñϧÁ ¸ÕòÐ ¦º¡øÄÄ¢§Â "¸¼×Ùõ ¿¡Ûõ", "¯ý ¿¢¨É׸û","Å¢¸¡Ã ±ñ½õ" §À¡ýÈÅüÈ¢üÌ? ¯í¸û «È¢×¨È¸û ÁÕ󾡸ġõ ±ÉìÌ - §ÁÖõ º£Ã¡¸ ±Ø¾...
ºÁÂò¾¢ø ±ÉìÌ ´ýÚõ ¦º¡øÄ §Åñ¼¡õ ±ýÈ¢ÕìÌõ- ±ýÉ¡ø ÒâóÐ ¦¸¡ûÇ ÓÊ¡¾ «ÛÀÅí¸û, ´òÐì ¦¸¡ûÇ ÓÊ¡¾ ¸ÕòÐì¸û, ±ý «À¢ôÀ¢Ã¡Âõ §À¡Ä§Å ²ü¦¸É§Å þý¦É¡ÕÅ÷ ¦º¡øĢŢÎÅÐ, «øÄÐ º¡¾¡Ã½ §º¡õÀø!!! þò¾¨É ¡õÀÅ¡ý¸û þí¸¢Õì¸ ¯í¸Ù즸ýÉ Ì¨È, °ì¸õ ¦ÀÈ?
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ÀÅÇ¡¢ ¿õ¨Áô ÒâóШÅòÐûÇ¡÷.¿£í¸Ùõ Å¢¨Ç¡ðÎìÌò¾¡ý ¦º¡ø¸¢È£÷¸û.(deign is too much of a word . i started grading poems in terms of marks based on vikatan's cine reviews.it appealed to many poets around here.as we do not see each other , it is a lot easier to say the genuine opinions on each other's works.i know u'll never like to receive grace marks,especially given the talent u've exhibited so far).
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TT «Å÷¸§Ç,
¾¢Ã¢¸Ç¢ø º¢Ä¸¡Äõ ¸Äì¸õ ¿¢ÄÅ¢Åó¾ §Å¨Ç... ¯í¸¨ÇÔõ ÅõÒìÌ þØì¸Ä¡§Á ±ýÈ Å¢¨Ç¡ðξ¡ý ±ÉÐ "«¼õ"! ¯í¸Ç ¾ÃõÀ¢Ã¢ìÌõ Å¢¾õ «Ä¡¾¢Â¡ÉÐ.. Á¾¢ô¦Àñ¸û objective ¬¸ þÕôÀ¾¡ø, ¿ÁÐ ¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ý ¾¡ì¸õ ÀüȢ ¸½¢ôÒ ¸¢¨¼ì¸¢ÈÐ. þó¾ ÓÂüº¢ ¦ÀâÐõ À¡Ã¡ðξüÌâÂÐ. Á¾¢ô¦Àñ ¾ÕÅÐ «ò¾¨É ±Ç¢¾¡É §Å¨ÄÂøÄ....«¾¢Öõ ´Õ ¿£¾¢À¾¢ ¾¡Éò¾¢ø þÕôÀÐ Óû §Áø ¿¼ôÀÐ §À¡Ä. ¿£í¸û «¾¨É ±Ç¢¾¡¸×õ, Å¢ÕôÒ¼Ûõ ¦ºöÐÅÕž¡ø¾¡ý "DEIGN" ±ýÈÀ¾õ ÀÂýÀÎò¾¢§Éý. You need to condescend to a level to evaluate objectively a poem and then be conscious of your position as well to deliver a judgement. This is an "occupational" demand!!!!
ÅÆì¸õ §À¡ø ¯í¸ÇÐ À¡ÌÀ¡¼üÈ, ¦¾Ç¢Å¡É ¾£÷ôÒ¸¨Ç ±¾¢÷À¡÷츢§Èý.!
"60 ¸¢¨¼îºÐ ¦Ã¡õÀ ºó§¾¡õ"!
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Sudhakar ,
How is your trip? I think you are in Chennai now. À½ò¾¢ý§À¡Ðõ ¸Å¢¨¾¦Â¡ý¨È ¾Ã ¿¢¨Éò¾¾üÌ ¿ýÈ¢. ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾¨Â þýÛõ ¿¡ý ÀÊì¸Å¢ø¨Ä. ÀÊòÐÅ¢ðÎ ±ý ¸ÕòÐì¸¨Ç ¾Õ¸¢§Èý :-)
Hi Roshan,
Thanks for your message. I am still in Chennai and would be moving to Delhi ( It is a MAD MAD MAD assignment!!)soon.
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