//SUDHIR ANNA epdi irukenga?!//
Kadhai nalla irunthuchu anna...puthusa,nakaichuvaiya..but one suggestion;neenga ella kahaigalaiyum ore thread-la ezhuthalaame....won't it be better?
anyways :notworthy: super narration!
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//SUDHIR ANNA epdi irukenga?!//
Kadhai nalla irunthuchu anna...puthusa,nakaichuvaiya..but one suggestion;neenga ella kahaigalaiyum ore thread-la ezhuthalaame....won't it be better?
anyways :notworthy: super narration!
Another excellent write up... :clap:
Keep it up Maddy Bro... :thumbsup:
Nice story... logic illaa magic....
Vayasaana thaaththaa bike'la... adhuvum high speed'la... rendu devil dogs'a iluththuttu pOradhu... sema comedy... :lol2:
Anyway story was enjoyable.... Nice narration... :notworthy: :thumbsup: :clap: :2thumbsup:
thanks NM.....it actually worked for some guy who narrated his experience in Kumudam :DQuote:
Originally Posted by NM
//i'm fine......doing great//Quote:
Originally Posted by VENKIRAJA
thanks for the appreciation :D , yes, i think i'll start writing my stories in one thread :D
thank you thank you :notworthy:Quote:
Originally Posted by Thalafanz
thanks Sarna for ur appreciation :D ........Quote:
Originally Posted by sarna_blr
ofcourse, indha thaatha saadharana thatha illa.....he is like Indian thatha :lol:
one thing purists wont like in ur stories is the way the story oscillates.... the moment the story touches a serious line, you dilute it with some crazy mohan kinda dialogue :)
anyway.........that is the kind of stuff i wud like to write as well...but in this particular story....... narration nu illama, motha story ume serious ah illa comedy ah nu theriyaatha maathiri aayiduchi :)
another thing i noted is, (since nanum antha maathiri panrathunala) usage of IT terms :), (viz., "permanent fix" etc.,)
except for the last two paras which takes the sheen off the entire story, the narration is very nice and good
Hi sudhir
nice story. wonderful narration.
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hey thanks for taking time to read and post your comments :D .......for me, a story should have prominent high points and low points to make it interesting - so it does oscillate........ :D ......Quote:
Originally Posted by rsubras
though words like "permanent fix" are not appropriate words for a old man, it brings the style element in the story - something like a rukmani dance by the oldies in roja :lol: .....also, the permanent fix will be used by the grandson and not the grandfather......
honestly, last 2 paras were very tuf for me to write....i wrote the entire story in as much time as i wrote the last 2 ones.........it is a completely visual concept and to bring it in writing was tuf........thats y i checked with Sinthiya, whether it evoked the right visuals in the mind when she read the last 2 paras.........to be frank, even i was not satisfied with the outcome of last 2 paras....
thanks again :D