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kanaga arumugam
22nd December 2004, 01:57 PM
en vazhkai tunaivanukku


Un vazhvin ellavatrilum
Naan Paathi endra
Ennathodu unnodu
Uravada vandhen!
vanda Naalandre en
natpai ilanden!
pinbu aasaiyai
ilanden!
pinbu en sogangalai
solli aarudal
adaivadarku oru thol
irukkiradu endru
ninaitthu athaiyum
ilanthu viduveno
endra bhayam enakku!

Kathir9999
22nd December 2004, 07:59 PM
It'sn't just right. Neenga enna solliyirukanum?..

nee nizalendru ninaiththu vandhEn, nAnAga mAri vittAi,
uravendru ninaiththu vandhEn, uyirAga mAri vittAi,
thOL mattum kEttu vandhEn, sumai thAngi Agi vittAi..
viLakkendru ninaiththu vandhEn, vidiyalay mAri vittAi..

most 'vaazkai thunai' befit the above.. but, kavidhai-nnu paartha
mudhal muyarci-nnu paartha, paaraattukkal.

Surya
23rd December 2004, 03:08 AM
Its ok. A bit dark, but still good. :)

Kathir9999
25th December 2004, 02:41 AM
ka.. nijamai nalla muyarci.

kanaga arumugam
25th December 2004, 02:59 PM
It'sn't just right. Neenga enna solliyirukanum?..

nee nizalendru ninaiththu vandhEn, nAnAga mAri vittAi,
uravendru ninaiththu vandhEn, uyirAga mAri vittAi,
thOL mattum kEttu vandhEn, sumai thAngi Agi vittAi..
viLakkendru ninaiththu vandhEn, vidiyalay mAri vittAi..

most 'vaazkai thunai' befit the above.. but, kavidhai-nnu paartha
mudhal muyarci-nnu paartha, paaraattukkal.




Thanks for the reply made by you. Neengal solra madiri nootrukku ondro erando peroda vazhkai than irukkiradu. meedhi 98 % peroda vazhkai naan solvadhu pol thaan irukkiradu.


Thanks & Regards

Kanaga arumugam