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Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-202-195.now-india.net.in) on Mon Jun 7 06:32:46 EDT 2004.




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þ§¾¡ ¯ÉìÌ «Ç¢ì¸ôÀð¼ ÀâÍ
Óؾ¡ö «Æ¸¡ö âÁ¢Â¢ø Áü¦È¡Õ ¿¡û
ºó¾¢Â¡ì¸¡Ä þ¨¼¦ÅÇ¢¸û ¯ý¨É ÁÂ측Áø ¸ÅÉÁ¡Â¢Õ.
À¸Ä¢ý ¦ÅðÀõ ¯ý¨É ¾¡ìÌí¸¡ø Á×ÉÁ¡Â¢Õ
¯ý ¯¨Æô¨À À¢Èô¨À ÀÂÛûǾ¡ö À¾¢× ¦ºöÐ ¦¸¡û
Á£ñÎõ þÕû-Åâý ¸Äí¸¡§¾

Å¢ÊÂø þýÛõ º¢È¢§¾ àÃõ.!

-„ì¾¢-

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Parisu
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vidiyalukku innum silamaNiyEvena
sillenRu kARRu mun-thikkoNdu aRiviththathu
eththanaiyO kavithaikaL punaiyappadum innorun-AL
vithavithamAy kathaikaL sethukkapadum innorun-AL

ezun-thiru!
inRu unsarithaiyum ezuthappadalAm enRa
iniya uyirOsai kuyilOsaiyAy mithakka
iruLai vizungki Eppam viddu
melliyakIRRAy sen-thUra vaNNam thalaithUkkiyathu

sethukku semmaiyAy un maNiththuLiyai
enRu aRaikUvaliddathu sEval
melliyathAy engkO olikkum suprapAtham
amaithiyAy n-issalanamAy sErn-thu koNdathu

ithO unakku aLikkappadda parisu
muzuthAy azakAy pUmiyil maRRoru n-AL
san-thiyAkkAla idaiveLikaL unnai mayakkAmal kavanamAyiru.
pakalin vedpam unnai thAkkungkAl mavunamAyiru
un uzaippai piRappai payanuLLathAy pathivu seythu koL
mINdum iruL-varin kalangkAthE

vidiyal innum siRithE thUram.!


-shakthi-

(NinaivalaigaL enra peyaril, orE thiriyil en kavithaigaLai avvapozuthu ezuthalaam enRa ennam)

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±Øó¾¢Õ!
þýÚ ¯ýºÃ¢¨¾Ôõ ±Ø¾ôÀ¼Ä¡õ ±ýÈ
þɢ ¯Â¢§Ã¡¨º Ì¢§Ä¡¨ºÂ¡ö Á¢¾ì¸
þÕ¨Ç Å¢Øí¸¢ ²ôÀõ Å¢ðÎ
¦ÁøĢ¸£üÈ¡ö ¦ºóàà Åñ½õ ¾¨Äà츢ÂÐ

shakthi! nambikkaiyuttum varikaL! suriyavaravai idhaividavum arumaiyagakkuramudiyuma? vaazththukkaL!
anbudan..shylaja


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ºì¾¢,
" Óؾ¡ö «Æ¸¡ö âÁ¢Â¢ø Áü¦È¡Õ ¿¡û "

þÐ Á¡Û¼ò¾¢ý ¾Å¢ôÒ. Óؾ¡ö,«Æ¸¡ö þý¦É¡Õ ¿¡û.

¿¡ð¸û ¦¸¡Îì¸ôÀθ¢ýÈÉ . ÓبÁÔõ , «ÆÌõ ¿õ¨Á ¦ºÐì¸¢ì ¦¸¡ûž¢ø ¯ûÇÐ. ¯üº¡¸õ °ðθ¢ýÈÉ ¯í¸û Åâ¸û .

¿ýÚ .




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¦Ã¡õÀ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿¡¨Çì¸ôÒÈõ ¯üº¡¸ãðÎõ ±Øðº¢äðÎõ ¸Å¢¨¾¨Â ÀÊò¾¾¢ø ¦Ã¡õÀ ¾¢Õô¾¢.
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¯üº¡¸õ ¯ò§Å¸õ À¡…£ðËù º¢ó¾¨Éò ¾£üÚ..

þó¿¡Ç¢ø «¾¢¸õ §¾¨ÅôÀÎõ °ì¸ÁÕóÐ..

ºì¾¢ ¦¸¡Îò¾ ºì¾¢ìÌ ¿ýÈ¢Ôõ À¡Ã¡ðÎõ..


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// ¯ý ¯¨Æô¨À À¢Èô¨À ÀÂÛûǾ¡ö À¾¢× ¦ºöÐ ¦¸¡û
Á£ñÎõ þÕû-Åâý ¸Äí¸¡§¾ //

Mr. Iyappan has aptly worded his praise. I concur. Parattukkal.


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„ì¾¢,

¸ÕòÐ ¯ò§Å¸ó¾¡ý.¸Å¢¨¾Â¢ø ¦¾¡ö×,¯Â÷×,¬ò¾¢î ÝÊ ¿¨¼ ±øÄ¡õ ¸ÄóÐ...50ìÌ «Õ¸¨¾ô Àθ¢ÈÐ.

¾¢Õò¾ì¸ý




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¿ýÈ¢ ¨„ă¡, ¦ƒº¢, ³ÂôÀý, ¸¾¢÷, ¦ºøÅõ ÁüÚõ TK

tk,

ATleast I got 50. Thats pass even from post graduate standard :D ..Anyway would try to do better.


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§¾ÊÅóÐ ¾ðÊÂÐ
«¾¢÷„ Å¡öôÒ!
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±ýÈ ¬Â¡ºõ
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±ýÈ ±ì¸¡Çõ
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«Îò¾Å¢ðÎ «§º¡ì¦¸ýÈ¡ø
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«¾¢÷‰¼õ «¾üÌû
«ÅºÃÁ¡ö ÀÈóÐÅ¢ð¼Ð!


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Opportunity knocks only once..
but temptation leans on the door-bell!

Nalla poem.

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waha waha raamji, kavithaa kyaa likhi hai! 70!

also kathir is perfecting the art of one-liners.
carry on folks.the town is getting a little redder than ever before simply because of the painting spree ( nothing leftist about it!)

tiruttakkan

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simple and elegant :)

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ÀÊòÐ, ú¢òÐ Á¸¢Æ:
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unggal poem romba nalla erukke keep it up

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:-)

shakthi,

excellent. ¯í¸û "ÀâÍ", ¿¡ý ÀÄÓ¨È ¯½÷ó¾¢Õ츢§Èý. ´ù¦Å¡Õ ¿¡Ù§Á ´Õ Àâ;¡ý.

´Õº¢ÄÕìÌ «Ð ¯À§Â¡¸Á¡É ÀâÍ. ´Õº¢ÄÕìÌ «Ð ¦ÅÚõ «Äí¸¡Ãô ÀâÍ. ´Õº¢ÄÕìÌ extra luggage....

¿¡ý ¯½÷ó¾ ´Õ Å¢„Âò¨¾ ¸Å¢¨¾Â¡ì¸¢Â¾¢ø ±ÉìÌ ºó§¾¡„õ...:-)

«¾¢÷‰¼õ... simple but true... :-)

:-)


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:-)

kathir,

:-))))))......... you are 100% right

:-)

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nandri, suresh,tk, kathir and akhil

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shakthi,

khwaab is now closed,respecting geno's sentiments(aapkaa khwaab adhooraa nahin rahEgaa.chintaa na keejiyE!).u can check my reply in the misc section-hindi learning thread.

tiruttakkan

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Å¡º¢ò¾ «ó¾ Á¸¢ú Á£ñÎõ..


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shakthi,
Å¢ÊÂø þýÛõ º¢È¢§¾ àÃõ.!

very optimistic and bold statement. The infusion of Time and space (vidiyal is a time based event and Dhooram is space based)is not felt here as an odd insertion. When the holistic expression is felt it adds more hues to the rising sun.
Thanks for a good poem
anpudan
srimangai


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:-)

just to prevent from getting into archives...:-)

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„ì¾¢ «Å÷¸§Ç Á£ñÎõ ¸Å¢¨¾ À¨¼ì¸ ÅÕ¸!
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