nizhal payanam.....

Topic started by shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on Wed Aug 27 14:57:20 .
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enakkendru suyamana edhuvumillai
endraalum en payanam thodarkirathu
thodarkindra ennai yereduthu paarpaarilai
endralum enpayanam mudivadhillai.
niram maara theriyatha nijam naan
nijathin pradhipimbam naan than
vilagaatha ore uravu endrum naan
mara nizhalaay naan irundhaal
madhippayiruppen
manidha nizhalaay iruppadhaal thaan
manangal marandhuvitta nilayil ullen
nijam niazhalaakum,
nizhal nijamaakumaa?

Responses:

From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Wed Aug 27 15:33:26 EDT 2003

NizhalgaL... Arumai... Very Nice and continue your good work.

Penne...!

Naan Nijam KettEn...
Nee Nizhal thanthaai
Nizhalodu Nizhalaaga
Naan Karainthu povathum...
Nijatthodu Nijamaaaga
Naan Kalanthu Povathum...
Unnidatthil thaan Ullathu!!!

¦Àñ§½!

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From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Aug 27 21:33:08 EDT 2003

sheik....arumai ungal kavidhai varigal! shylaja
From: anand (@ 61.6.65.26) on: Wed Aug 27 21:49:28 EDT 2003

shail,
nandraaga, inimaiyaaga irunthathu unggal kavithai.
Shail....ullathil niraiya bhaarama?

Niram maara malar nee....
manam maara malarum nee.
nee ennul endrum nilalaai
iruppathum nijam...
enakku nee nilalaai iruppathum nijam.
unakku naan nilala?
enakku nee nilala?
onru maddhum purighirathu
unnul....
ennul....
nilalum nijamum kalanthe kidakkinrathu!

endrum anbudan
anand
From: malligai (@ 0-1pool58-82.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Thu Aug 28 13:45:06 EDT 2003

Wowow,

Shylaja, Sheik and Anand...

all the three kavithais are good...

Sheik,

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¿¢ƒò§¾¡Î ¿¢ƒÁ¡ö
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From: malligai (@ 0-1pool58-82.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Thu Aug 28 14:02:44 EDT 2003

An attempt...

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´ýÈ¡¸ô À¢Èì¸ §ÅñÎõ...

À¢ý ¿¡§Á ¿¢¨Éò¾¡Öõ
¿õ¨Á À¢Ã¢ì¸ þÂÄ¡Ð!!
From: Surathi (@ cache1-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Fri Aug 29 03:49:56 EDT 2003

¯í¸û «¨ÉÅÕìÌ§Á ÁÉõ ¿¢¨Èó¾ À¡Ã¡ðÎì¸û. Shy, ¯í¸û ¸Å¢¨¾ ±ò¾¨É §ÅÚ ¸Å¢¨¾¸ÙìÌ Å¢ò¾¢ðÊÕì¸¢ÈÐ !! Shylu, You can be really proud of the response.. It's another feather in your over-crowded cap.

ÁøÄ¢¨¸, ¿£í¸û ²ý þò¾¨É ¿¡û ±Ø¾Å¢ø¨Ä ±ýÀÐ þô§À¡ ÒÃ¢ÔÐ.. ±ò¾¨É §À÷ ¯Èì¸õ ¦¾¡¨Äò¾¡÷¸§Ç¡ þó¾ ¯¹¸û ¸Å¢¨¾¨Âô ÀÊòÐ Å¢ðÎ..

Malligai, In the colorful garden Shylu has created, you've come in as a gentle breeze, so fragrant and lovely, so cool and full of grace.

Shy, unglal edhuvum mudiyum.. idhuvum! idhai vida veru enna solla?

- Surathi.
From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Aug 29 05:42:35 EDT 2003

paaraattavum nalla manam vendum
adhu ingu sila anbu nenjangalukku
adhikamagave irukkirathu...
padaippaalikalukku paaraattaividavum
verenna vendum?
nandri kuraamal vittal
adhu nayavanjagam andro?
niazhal payanmay en pani
thodarven..nandri....shylaja
From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Fri Aug 29 09:50:25 EDT 2003

ÁøÄ¢¨¸,

Å¡§Ã Å¡ù. ¸Äì¸¢ðËí¸. ¿¡ý ¯í¸¨Ç ¸Å¢¨¾ ±Ø¾î ¦º¡øÄ¢ ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿¡û ¬ÉÐ. þô§À¡ ¾¡ý ¯í¸§Ç¡¼ ¸Å¢¨¾¨Â Ó¾ý Ó¾Ä¡¸ ÀÊì¸¢§Èý. ¦Ã¡õÀ ¿øÄ¡ þÕìÌ. ¿¡§Á ¿¢¨Éò¾¡Öõ ¿¨Áô À¢Ã¢ì¸ ÓÊÂ¡Ð. very nice. keep up the good job. write more and all the best.

Shylu,
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§ºì ¾¡çò
From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-202.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Mon Sep 1 01:22:47 EDT 2003

Sheik,

Thankss...neenga elorum eluthiyathai paarthathum elutha vendum pola thonichu..

Surathi,

naalu varighaluku ivalavu paaratukala??...nanri
From: Surathi (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Sep 2 00:54:19 EDT 2003

idhu unga debut. adhananal ellorukkum magizchi.
From: Surathi (@ cache2-2.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Sep 2 06:00:42 EDT 2003

Shylaja, nizhal payanam, nalla thalaippu..

nijamum nizhalum
-----------------

nijamum nizhalum
eppodhume payanam seigirathu
arugaruge..

nizhalin parimANam
marikkondeyirukkirathu eppodhum,
nijam eppodhum ore madhiri..

iruttiley theduvathum undu
nijam sila samayam - than
nizhal enge ena.

vidinthathum varugiraye,
iravellam engirunthai? endru
nijam kobippathum undu..

nizhal solli koLLum mounamai..
"pala samayam neeyum naanumai,
sila samayam neeye naanai! "
From: Surathi (@ cache7-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Sep 2 06:00:59 EDT 2003

Shylaja, nizhal payanam, nalla thalaippu..

nijamum nizhalum
-----------------

nijamum nizhalum
eppodhume payanam seigirathu
arugaruge..

nizhalin parimANam
marikkondeyirukkirathu eppodhum,
nijam eppodhum ore madhiri..

iruttiley theduvathum undu
nijam sila samayam - than
nizhal enge ena.

vidinthathum varugiraye,
iravellam engirunthai? endru
nijam kobippathum undu..

nizhal solli koLLum mounamai..
"pala samayam neeyum naanumai,
sila samayam neeye naanai! "
From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Sep 2 07:46:20 EDT 2003

malligai,

ungalukkuL oru azhahaana pulavi (peNpaar pulavar)

"¿£ ±ý ¿¢ƒÁ¡¸×õ
¿¡ý ¯ý ¿¢ÆÄ¡¸×õ "<<

niraiya artham niranda varigal

:)
vaazhtukkal

shylaja,

nalla karpanai.

surathi,

ur have abundant talent

btw,

"nizhalin parimANam
marikkondeyirukkirathu eppodhum,
nijam eppodhum ore madhiri"<<

nijangalin parimANamum marum!
vayadaaal
mudirchiyaal
pakkuvathaaal
mana nilaiyaal
....

""pala samayam neeyum naanumai,
sila samayam neeye naanai! " "<<<

azhaha irukku
From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Sep 2 07:48:12 EDT 2003

shylaja,

do u use yahoo messenger? (I think ur mail id is messenger id??)

shall i buzz u?

(i m pretty lazy to write mails...hehe)

if u dont have messenger, i shall write to u soon.
From: Surathi (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Sep 2 10:38:04 EDT 2003

Thank you, Shakti. Romba nalla review.. nanri
From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Sep 2 13:27:45 EDT 2003

ya..i have that..and u r correct....meet me at yahoo messenger, shakthi.........with regards...shylaja
From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Wed Sep 3 10:34:40 EDT 2003

hi,

bulls eye ,lady! 55 markukaL. mElum...

tiruttakkan
From: krishna kumar (@ 203.200.30.4) on: Fri Sep 12 12:12:48 EDT 2003

Shylu

I read this nizhalum nijamum today...its simply superb...vazhkaiyim oru mugathai azhagana varigalil solli irukireergal...look forward for more from you
From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 12 14:03:56 EDT 2003

shylaja,

I buzzed u once in ur messeger.... u did not get back!!!

???
From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 12 14:04:35 EDT 2003

shylaja,

I messeged u in ur messeger (not buzzed) u did not get back!!

Did u receive my messege?

??
From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 12 21:42:02 EDT 2003

i dint get any shakthi.....thers some prob in my messenger, y dont u send me a small mail so that i can send a reply to you? shylaja

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