Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Wed Aug 27 01:38:24 .
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VaikaRai vidiyal indrum ..
Sandithu viduven unnai indrenum..
Edhir paarthu kaathirukiren
ovvoru vidiyalum nambikai OOtru
kAthiruppEn, en swAsam
kalandhu vidum nAAl varaiyil!

VArAdha nEE pOnAlum
Vaikaraiyil karaindhu
KalandiduvEn un unarvAga.

KadhalanE..
pirandhum irandha naan
irandhum pirappen unakkaga!

endrum un
shakthi

Responses:

• From: Sheik (@ h216-170-142-235.dsl.tds.net) on: Wed Aug 27 11:22:44 EDT 2003
  
  Very Nice,
  
  intha thalaippula ithukku munnaadi neenga kavidhai ezhuthi irukkeengalaa? intha thalaippa engeyo padiththa maathiri irukku. any way very nice and keep up the good work.
  
  I like this line very much...
  
  >>>ovvoru vidiyalum nambikai OOtru <<<
  
  Very nice.
  
  Natpudan
  Sheik
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool89-19.nas33.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Wed Aug 27 13:56:27 EDT 2003
  
  Wowow!!!..Shakthi...this is beauthiful...i can feel the intensity in ur words...good job!!...
  
  'Vaikaraiyil karaindhu
  KalandiduvEn un unarvAga.'
  
  ---these lines r beautiful...Expecting more from u..
  
  Malligai
  
  
• From: shylaja (@ 203-195-196-66.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Aug 27 14:34:38 EDT 2003
  
  very nice shakthi....shylaja
  
  
• From: Push (@ 61.1.205.161) on: Fri Aug 29 06:30:50 EDT 2003
  
  Janma janmamAi
  endrum un
  shakthi
  
  -intha irandu varikaley poothum....
  unkal kavidhaiyodu
  intha varikal arumiiii
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Aug 29 13:37:27 EDT 2003
  
  Malligai, shylaja, sheik, push
  
  thanks
  
  "KadhalanE..
  pirandhum irandha naan
  irandhum pirappen unakkaga!
  "<<<
  
  was my fav...
  I guess noone liked that
  
  Thoughts, ideas, opinions, life, purpose
  all varies dont they?
  so does taste!
  
  guess i blabbered too much!
  
  thx anyway
  
  
  
• From: flowerguy (@ balance1.baplc.com) on: Mon Sep 1 08:24:42 EDT 2003
  
  there are many methods to calculate the age of this universe,earth, moon...etc..
  if we compare our age with the age of these celestial objects...the difference would be vast.
  
  jenma jenmamaai nadakkum sila vishayangalai, manithargaL maranthaalum,
  a celestial object like moon is capable of recording all these activities...
  
  idhaithaan namadhu kannadasan ...andru azhagaaga sonnaar...
  
  andru sendrathum maranthaai uravai.
  indru vandhathu puthiya paravai.
  endha jenmathilum oru thadavai.
  naam sandhippom indha nilavai.
  
  kannadasan was scientifically correct :-)
  
  Good One Shakthi.
  
  (i think you wrote something similar to this already.
  oru jenmathil vanjikka pattavaL....innoru jenmathil pazhi vaanguvaal...
  andha kavithaiyil pazhikku-pazhi.
  indha kavithaiyil praayachittamaa? )
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ socks1.corp.yahoo.com) on: Mon Sep 1 14:54:33 EDT 2003
  
  :) good wordings
  
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Sep 2 07:59:14 EDT 2003
  
  thx flowerguy and iyyapan
  
  yeah i wrote about a lady who would love to take vengence....
  
  
  love vaaries from person to person
  
  that lady wanted vengence
  this lady wants co mpromise
  
  :)
  
  
• From: avathaani Kajan (@ wc09.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Fri Sep 5 00:20:31 EDT 2003
  
  First of all I am producing the poem in Tmail without Shakthi's permission.
  
  ¨Å¸¨È Å¢ÊÂø þýÚõ ..
  ºó¾¢òРŢÎŦ¾É ¯ý¨É þñ§ÈÛõ..
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  ¸¡¾Ä§É...
  À¢ÈóÐõ þÈó¾ ¿¡ý
  þÈóÐõ À¢È§Àý ¯É측¸!
  
  my general feelings about love :
  I don't write and don't comment on poems based on love. this first time writing comments for it.
  It is very difficult to c love in real life. in our life one in 100 may be 1 in 1000 made for each other. but there r certain good couples getting together by proposal marriage.
  
  youngers r attracted by opposite sex , they used to call this as love , this is very serious problem putting them in real trouble if they get married. when and how youth will realise this. ( don't forget i am not against love- still looking for my one and only one lover at my age of 30s )
  
  
  now comments on poem,
  here it is suffereing of true love desparate to get together with lover.
  
  but I wonder has he died and she is waiting for next birth what has poet meant by >þÈóÐõ À¢È§Àý ¯É측¸>
  please clarify this ?
  
  If u talking about next genman ( rebirth ), I am sorry i am not clear with it.
  
  If something bad happen in our life ( like loosing lover ) we should get back to the life in some other terms. But is it possible for true love, that is an argument, it is possible in some cases. but even then we can not stay away from memories.
  
  in this poem such memories r described by good wordings, c an example---->
  >À¢ÈóÐõ þÈó¾ ¿¡ý
  þÈóÐõ À¢È§Àý ¯É측¸! >
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on: Fri Sep 5 02:20:29 EDT 2003
  
  kanamani
  naan piranthathu unakkaaga..
  naan irappathum unakkaaga..
  nam kaathalai puthipippatharkkaagha!!.
  Anbudan
  Anand
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Fri Sep 5 05:17:57 EDT 2003
  
  anand,
  
  kaNAAmani ya?(kaaanaaama pona maniya?)
  KaNmaniyA?
  
  lol
  
  kajan
  
  "þÈóÐõ À¢È§Àý ¯É측¸> "<<
  
  even after i die, my dreams for u reamains, so i shall manifest again to fulfill my dreams to wards u
  
  "À¢ÈóÐõ þÈó¾ ¿¡ý "<<<
  
  i am though alive dead mentally!....
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Fri Sep 5 23:27:13 EDT 2003
  
  hi,
  
  naan markup pOTTaal vaattiyaarellaam illai. uNmaiyaa oruttarukkoruttar vimarchanattaich chonnaadhaanE vaLarchchi? adhukku indha aanandha vikatan vazhi enakkup piDittuLLadhu.
  
  40 dhaan .ok..?
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  

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