Topic started by Thaya (@ 192.30.226.29) on Sat Mar 30 16:31:01 .
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Sariththiraththil
Sambavam azhahu!
Samuththiraththil
Sanguthaan azhahu!

Erinthaalum
Sooriyan azhahu!
Eriyaamale
Santhiran azhahu!

Eduththuvaiththa
Unavuthaan azhahu!
Edukkaamale enakku ival
Endraikkum perazhahu!!

Responses:

• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-33-10.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Apr 1 00:22:57
  
  "Samuththiraththil
  Sanguthaan azhahu! "
  
  Muthu???
  
  
  "Eduththuvaiththa
  Unavuthaan azhahu!
  Edukkaamale enakku ival
  Endraikkum perazhahu!!"<<<<<<
  
  :(
  Sathiyama ennaku puriyalai!!
  ???? :(
  
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ toronto-ppp274715.sympatico.ca) on: Tue Apr 2 16:28:55
  
  "Muththu"....sure why not.
  but i in this kavithai "Sangu" has won the place just because of it's first letter.
  
  Eduththuvaiththa
  Unavuthaan azhahu!
  Edukkaamale enakku ival
  Endraikkum perazhahu!!"<<<<<<
  
  Inga onnum special'aa puriyanum'nnu illa i guess.
  
  manasila thonina first thing was..
  
  "Edukkaamale enakku ival
  Endraikkum perazhahu!!"
  
  and tried to start from there,however karppanai varalai.so desided to place them at the end and build the kavithai arround it.
  
  sometimes thinking from the end gives better results u know.
  
  "Edukkaamale enakku ival
  Endraikkum perazhahu!!"
  
  kaathali'nnu aahamunnaadiye oruththiya eppadi rasikka mudinchuthu....ithaan ithukku ennoda arththam.
  ungalukkum apdi theriyuthaa?
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-39-151.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Apr 3 00:43:47
  
  Adaavadu,
  
  Sondham kollamale...apditane???
  
  "ungalukkum apdi theriyuthaa?"<<<<
  
  Neenga sonnatukkapram yoschu paartal,
  theriyudu.
  
  
  
  edhukum kavidaikku keezha
  
  padavurai...pozhupurai ezhudidunga...
  
  Enna madiri (dumbo!) puriyadavarkku
  sowgariyamai irukum.
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Wed Apr 3 11:51:09
  
  
  "Sondham kollamale...apditane???"
  
  nop...sonthaam kolla munnaale....
  
  edhukum kavidaikku keezha
  padavurai...pozhupurai ezhudidunga...
  
  nejamaavaa.....avvalavu mosamaa irukkaa?
  veeddukku poi azhanum.
  
  
• From: anita (@ 202.188.207.235) on: Thu Apr 4 02:42:15
  
  'kaikuttai' supply pannatuma thaya?
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Thu Apr 4 12:23:28
  
  LOL
  
  aamaa enga kaanom?
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-33-49.mantraonline.com) on: Fri Apr 5 13:24:48
  
  "nejamaavaa.....avvalavu mosamaa irukkaa? "<<<
  
  Noway!
  
  Naan daan sonene naan dumbo!
  
  LOL
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Fri Apr 5 15:00:27
  
  :)
  
  chee chee athellaam illa.
  Dumbo'vum illa onnum illa.
  
  Rasani irunthaa azhahaa iruppaanga.
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ 192.30.226.29) on: Fri Apr 5 15:03:49
  
  athu seri,ellaa posting'm paakkirathilliyaa neenga?illa,pass pannuveengalaa?
  
  so,i'm posting this here again.for you to see.
  
  
  Ennai Thedum Yaarum
  Unnai Thedi Vanthaal
  Athisayam Kollaathe!
  
  Ennuyir Vaazhvathu
  Unnudal enpathi
  Inimelum Maraikkaathe
  
  Malaihal Erihinrana
  Manangal Azhihinrana-ini nee
  Mallaakkai Padukkaathe
  
  Naadkal Pirappathe-unnai
  Nanraaha Paarkkathaan-ithai
  Naan Sonnathaai Sollaathe ;)
  
  
  pasikkira aalukku paal "kondupoi" kudukkiraa pola...:)
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-37-38.mantraonline.com) on: Sat Apr 6 01:52:08
  
  Thaya!!,
  
  
  "
  chee chee athellaam illa.
  Dumbo'vum illa onnum illa.
  
  Rasani irunthaa azhahaa iruppaanga."<<<<
  
  Excuse me!!!
  
  Dumbo is a word used to refer intellectual ability!
  How can u correlate it with physical beauty?
  
  
  "athu seri,ellaa posting'm paakkirathilliyaa neenga?illa,pass pannuveengalaa?
  so,i'm posting this here again.for you to see. "<<<<
  
  LOL, Thaya,
  
  I dont wanna hurt u.
  But that kavidai did not impress me much!
  
  A kavidai is appreciated
  
  1.If it has a punch or conveys unique messege
  2.Or should be too good in poetic sense (kavidai nayam)! not just rhyming words!
  3.Or the emotions expressed should overwhelm u that u forget other criterias
  
  I find none of these in ur said poem
  
  Chumma, it ends with
  
  marakade, kollade, padukade, Sollade!
  
  Edu mattume kavidai alla.
  I mean ennai vida ingu ellorum kavidaigalil vallunargalai irukiraargal
  I think they all appreciated u for the same poem
  
  But this poem is not to my taste! Naan oru best critic illai.
  So dont be hurt. Its just my view.
  
  Plz plz plz dont be hurt. The prob with me is, I appreciate or say "good"
  only when I mean it.
  
  Hence I cant bring myself to say I like this poem.
  (I am really really really really really sorry! plz dont be hurt)
  
  "pasikkira aalukku paal "kondupoi" kudukkiraa pola...:) "<<<
  
  Paavam naan ippadi solven endru teriyamal explanations veru kuduteergal!
  I am sorry.
  
  
• From: anita (@ 202.188.207.7) on: Sat Apr 6 02:15:05
  
  aanaal,
  puli pasittaalum pullai tinnaathe !!!
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ toronto-ppp3537520.sympatico.ca) on: Sat Apr 6 20:51:32
  
  
  Rasani irunthaa azhahaa iruppaanga."<<<<
  
  Excuse me!!!
  
  Dumbo is a word used to refer intellectual ability! <<<
  
  I thought so too.
  
  How can u correlate it with physical beauty?
  huh?
  what physical beauty?remember....we are discussing.
  where is physical beauty came from?and who cares about it here??
  
  "Rasanai irunthaa azhahaa iruppaanga"
  did you take the word "Azhahu" litterely?I think so.
  
  "Kavithai azhahaa irukku""Nadai azhahaa irukku""Paaddu azhahaa irukku""Kural azhahaa irukku".......
  Let me rephrase the sentence.
  
  Azhahu illaathavangalum,rasanai irunthaa, Azhahaa therivaanga.
  
  "that kavidai did not impress me much!"
  "Paavam naan ippadi solven endru teriyamal explanations veru kuduteergal!
  I am sorry."
  >>>>(I am really really really really really sorry! plz dont be hurt)<<<<
  
  Embarresed.thats all.and you were right.
  
  oh well....
  
  Thanal kondu thamizhai chuddaal
  Thangam pol tharaththai kolvom
  Manal kolla manitham suddal
  Marupadi ezhuvom-naam
  Maranikka maaddom!!
  
  
  Thanx
  
  
• From: Kamala (@ adventnet.co.in) on: Tue Apr 16 06:04:51
  
  Marupadi ezhuvom-naam
  Maranikka maaddom!!
  
  Excellent Thaya !!!
  
  Kamala
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Tue Apr 16 12:34:47
  
  Oh Thanks Kamala......I think you looked in a wrong post of that kavithai.
  
  That para is the end of "MARANIKKA MAADDOM" posten fully in other thread.
  hope you will read it.
  
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-10.maa.sify.net) on: Mon Apr 29 07:47:58
  
  Dear Thaya
  
  Thappa nenaikkalaena oru chinna sugession
  
  >> Sumuthirathil sangu than azhagu <<
  
  idhai "samudhirathil sangazhagu" appadi matri irundha endha oru kelviyum vandhirukkadhu
  
  Adhavadhu
  
  enakku theriyala
  enakke theriyala.. There is lots of different..
  Ippo sanguthan azhagunnu sonnal matrathu azhagu illangara mathiri aayidum illaya..
  sangazhagu appadingara podhu sangum azhagu artham innu varudhu illaya
  and Last para was not giving exact meaning what you was trying to give ..
  
  Thavarirundhal mannikkavum
  
  Anbudan Iya
  
  
• From: Thaya. (@ 206-47-144-49.ip.tor.radiant.net) on: Mon Apr 29 11:23:42
  
  Right.
  still glad that,all those trigered a coversation,and we bring our best and learned from it i guess.
  
  

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