Topic started by littlepoetess (@ 202.9.171.191) on Thu May 23 13:54:44 .
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An expression of the thoughts in my mind

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• From: littlepoetess (@ 202.9.171.191) on: Thu May 23 13:57:30
  
  Unexpected
  ***********
  
  In these many years of life,
  Many things have happened to me,
  Some expected ones,
  Many unexpected ones,
  And You come in the second category,
  Till now, I have never even dreamt or imagined that I would meet you,
  But it all happened, all of a sudden,
  On one fine day,
  Leaving me thunderstruck till this moment !
  
  
  
• From: Thaya (@ blossom.tpl.toronto.on.ca) on: Thu May 23 14:13:25
  
  good feeling and it's the begining for a poem.
  keep writing your mind like that.
  good luck.
  
  
• From: littlepoetess (@ 202.9.171.72) on: Fri May 24 12:24:15
  
  Everything
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  Some 18 years back, my life started,
  As a little daughter to my Mother,
  As years rolled by,
  I met many people,
  Went to many places,
  Came across different atmospheres,
  Met with some of the worst situations that could happen to anyone,
  But I survived all by God's grace. . .
  
  As years rolled by,
  I managed to become
  Somebody to many people,
  A friend to some,
  Also a foe to two or three,
  A person special to a very few,
  On the whole I managed to mean "something" to many people,
  But when will I become "everything" to Someone ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
  
  
  
• From: Thinker (@ bangdp-35-138.mantraonline.com) on: Fri May 31 21:00:04
  
  Good thoughts.
  
  verses split in 2 to 3 lines does not make a poem.
  Good prose!
  
  "But when will I become "everything" to Someone ? ? ? ? ? ? ? "<<<<<<<
  
  lilpoetess,
  
  its nice for fantasy, but noone is indispensible that u become, EVERYTHING TO SOMEONE!
  
  Self is prominent, that comes first. REst are next.
  
  

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