Topic started by rajinidasan (@ 12.47.98.180) on Wed Oct 29 04:19:07 EST 2003.
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naadhikal endru unnai sollalam
aanal nee prachanai ellai.........

megam endru unnai sollalam
anal nee kadum malai ellai.....

un mel nan oormai kondadalam
anal nee en ooravum ellai......

yaar nee??
ennai kollai kondavala
kondru pottavala

aalagi endru unnai arathikalam
anal nee aabathu ellai....

pookal endru unnai poojikalam
anal nee vaduvathu ellai.....

kavithai endru unnai kondadalam
anal nee karpanai ellai.....

yaar nee??
ennai purinthukondavala
ennai enaku puriya vaithavala

Responses:

• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Wed Oct 29 08:37:45 EST 2003
  
  60 -class! this is the first of your work i am reading.please go ahead.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: puthiya baaNan (@ 207.10.158.204) on: Wed Oct 29 10:15:55 EST 2003
  
  Hmm.. interesting..
  
  
• From: Shakthipriya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Oct 29 13:54:26 EST 2003
  
  concept not clear!
  
  may be thats what the whole poem is about.
  
  Poem is nto bad. But i guess u have better potential!
  
  keep wrting
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool84-185.nas31.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Thu Oct 30 00:21:47 EST 2003
  
  Rajinidasan,
  
  nala iruku...ena ithu orey DOK stylela daily oru kavithai release seiyareenga...
  
  good, keep going...
  
  
• From: Surya (@ 210.18.21.101.sify.net) on: Thu Dec 11 02:42:56
  
  It is good. The last line very impress
  purithaver poogaz ver unn kavithiyai
  kept up
  
  
• From: Surya (@ 210.18.21.101.sify.net) on: Thu Dec 11 02:45:22 EST 2003
  
  It is good. The last line very impress
  purithaver poogaz ver unn kavithiyai
  keep it up
  
  
• From: JEYANTHIMEERA (@ 202.185.32.191) on: Tue Dec 16 22:37:39 EST 2003
  
  very nice
  YAAR AVAL?
  
  
• From: ilakia (@ 203.106.188.53) on: Wed Dec 24 05:15:34 EST 2003
  
  kavithai super!!!!!
  
  

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