Topic started by Ram (@ 63.161.25.208) on Thu May 2 09:43:21 .
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Kaalaimuthal maalai varai kaNippoRi mun kazhiththa vaNNam
mooLaithanai kaSakkippizhiya SOrvaDainthathu eNNam.
vElaithanai mooTTai kaTTi uDaippil thookkippoTTu
SalaigaLil iRaNgkiya kaNatthil viZhunthEn mayakkam pOTTu.

vizhiththuppaarkkaiyil vaanatthil paRantha vaNNam naan!
Sezhiththa Sirippinai Sinthiya vaNNa VaNNamaay thEvathaigaL
muzhiththu muzhitthu paarttha SaRRu nEram
kazhiththuthaan purinthathu avai vaNNa dEvadaigaL enRu!

Valam vantha dEvadaigaLai valam vanthu vaNaNgkiya naan,
nilam viTTU pulam peyarnthu PaRantha vaNNam
vaNNaNgkaLai nOkki en eNNaNgkaLai cholli
VaNNamaay Sila VaraNgkaL kETTEn!

PaSumaiyinai paRaiSaaRRum pachchai dEvadaiyE!
eNgkaL vaarthaigaLil pugunthu vathaikkaa varam thaa!

neeLamaana vaanamellam nirampiyirukkum neelA naNbaa!
eNgkaL thiraippaDaNgkaLil pugunthu paDuththaatha varam thaa!

Kaalam SuzhanRu iRuthiyil maNNE ena
kaaviyaNgkaL koorum kaavi thalaivaa!
thayavu Seythu mathaNgkaLil puGunthu maaykkaatha varam thaa!

azhagaana ithazh Sirippai idhamaay alaNgkarikkum Sigappu Selvaa!
kalavaraNgkaLil kuruthiyaay unnai urumaaRRaa varam thaa!

paal vaNNamaay amaithiyai uNarththum veLLai thalaivaa!
Maal vaNNathaariDam irunthu unnai piriththukkaaTTi
pirachchanai tharaatha varam thaa!

en eNNamellaam uruvaakkum KaNNanin VaNNamE!
eNgkaL manaNgkaLil pugunthu iruLai nirappaa varam thaa!


viDikaalai vELaiyil pon kathiraay oLiyiDum maNjchaLE!
ekkaaraNam koNDum eNgkaL puththagaNgkaLil
pugunthiDaatha varam thaa!

thiDeerenRu,
"niRka" enRu oru kural!

VaNNaNgkaL anaiththum orE kuralil koorina,
"naNbaa!vaNNaNgkaL naaNgkaL veRum pimpaNgkaL,
uNgkaL eNNaNgkaLai maaRRuNgkaL ulagam uyyum.
niRaNgkaLai kooRi palanEthum illai-makkaL
manaNgkaLiDam pOy kooRu....."
enRu uraiththana!!!

Responses:

• From: Ram (@ 63.161.25.208) on: Thu May 2 16:53:15
  
  ennappa yaarum onnum solla mattengareenga?
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ spxychi1.bankofamerica.com) on: Thu May 2 20:13:54
  
  ithu oru kathai maathiri irukku, konjam TIME vENum patikka
  
  
• From: Ram (@ cee-nt63.ce.wsu.edu) on: Thu May 2 22:37:45
  
  Kuran,
  pls take ur time but lemme know what u think?
  
  
• From: anita (@ bkj-cache83.jaring.my) on: Fri May 3 00:58:46
  
  puthiya sotkalin payanpaadu nandru
  
  aanal kavithaiyil innum pala maatranggal seiyappadalaam...melum muyatchi seiyunggal
  
  (nalla katpanai pandringga ram !!!)
  
  
• From: Ram (@ amigo.ce.wsu.edu) on: Fri May 3 01:46:32
  
  Romba nanri Anita...I'll try tp improve....BTW enga enna maathri natrangal nu Velakkinaa nalla irukkum
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-34-97.mantraonline.com) on: Sun Jun 2 15:26:05
  
  Very nice messege conveyed.
  
  Poem is very good.
  
  Kadaisee para thaaan crux.
  
  "
  en eNNamellaam uruvaakkum KaNNanin VaNNamE! "<<<<<<<
  
  Nandru uraitheer.
  
  Amaam adenna nirangalai ellam aanpaal ( Gender-male?) aakiviteer?
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Sun Jun 2 17:45:09
  
  Shakthi,
  Thanks for you encouraging words...enGa iyarkaiyin varnanaigaL ellan peNgalaagathan irukkanumaa enna?
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Sun Jun 2 19:26:06
  
  Shakthi,
  Ippothaan neenGa thinker enRu therinjuthu....I had read in one of ur postings that "If the kavithai is nor worth commenting or if I dont like it I dont comment on it" nu solli iruntheenga....cha Namma kavithai ellam comment paNNa kooda worth illai pola irukku nu nenaichen....It was a pleasant surprise for :-)
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-35-175.mantraonline.com) on: Mon Jun 3 01:05:00
  
  :-)
  
  
• From: Maha (@ brk-22-76.tm.net.my) on: Thu Jun 13 22:46:23
  
  Hi, Ram
  I like to read poems and enjoyed it and
  you are having good talent on writing poems.
  Each words adding your poems very nice.
  Keep it up.
  
  
  
• From: Ram (@ 63.161.26.234) on: Thu Jun 13 23:31:24
  
  Nanri Maha unGal ookkathukku.
  
  

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