Topic started by Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on Wed Mar 5 02:03:31 .
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Attuvittal aadum bommai
adu pOl endan nilaimai
Valarnda kanavu kootai kalaithu
pirarukaaai vazhum verumai!

Pagalavanai pidikkaada kodumai
Pagal vesham podum Madamai
Iravukkai engum en Ooona kuralukku
Nilavoli taruvadO tanimai!

Tanimaiyil narthanamaadum en pudhumai
vedhanaiyai veliyida mudiyaa uvamai
Enna chiragai varudi kondu,
ennagalaal mattumE nidam tazhuvugiren inimai!

vaazhkaiyE kanavai!
KanavE vaazhkaiyaai!

endrum,
Shakthi

Responses:

• From: Iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Wed Mar 5 03:12:45
  
  Shakthi,
  good one, romba nalaikkappuram marabu kavithai padithta unarvu. edhugai monai pottu nalla ezuthi irukkinga... vaazhthukkal
  anbudan
  iya
  
  
• From: Kajan (@ 24.103.235.73) on: Wed Mar 5 03:36:55
  
  >>vaazhkaiyE kanavai!
  KanavE vaazhkaiyaai<<
  
  read somewhere before.
  
  Ammani,
  ur concept of last poems seem to be same - I feel.
  May I know the cause ?
  
  anyway, wording of "Kai Bommai" is good.
  
  
• From: Kovalan (@ wc05.mtnk.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Wed Mar 5 09:43:37
  
  Nice one Shakthi...
  
  
• From: Kovalan (@ wc05.mtnk.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com) on: Wed Mar 5 09:43:45
  
  Nice one Shakthi...
  
  
• From: 7 (@ ) on: Sat Aug 30 22:59:29
  
  tyrtyrtyy
  
  
• From: Surathi (@ cache8-5.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Sun Aug 31 03:55:31 EDT 2003
  
  Shakti, none of your recent kavidhais were as perfect as this one. it is a wonderful expression of solititude. rombavum feel panni ezhuthiyadhu maadhiri irukku..
  
  
• From: malligai (@ 0-1pool59-202.nas22.thornton1.co.us.da.qwest.net) on: Mon Sep 1 01:27:09 EDT 2003
  
  "Valarnda kanavu kootai kalaithu
  pirarukaaai vazhum verumai!"
  
  wow, Shakthi...beautiful espression!
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Tue Sep 2 08:08:48 EDT 2003
  
  nandri malligai, surathi
  
  
• From: Iyappan (@ lan-202-144-73-12.maa.sify.net) on: Tue Sep 2 13:14:17 EDT 2003
  
  pazikku pazi vanjcaththukku vanjam ithu than sattam arasi....
  ;)
  
  vambudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Thu Sep 4 12:40:05 EDT 2003
  
  zen swamiyar,
  
  en ippodellam romba
  
  vambu samiyaar
  
  agitaar?
  
  edavadu.....
  
  kaa..
  
  (karanam irukkannnu keten...ada!!! neenga vera)
  
  
  
• From: tiruttakkan (@ nhpc.nic.in) on: Fri Sep 5 23:12:20 EDT 2003
  
  hi,
  
  pOna kavidhaiyin 'punch missing. koi baat nahim..'...45 anyway.
  
  tiruttakkan
  
  
• From: iyappan (@ 203.200.61.1) on: Sat Sep 6 05:05:29 EDT 2003
  
  kaaranangal kEtkum kaarigaiyeer
  kaaranam neer ariyaathathundO
  thamayan unnidam sollaam seytha
  kaariyangal nee arinthu Ethum undO
  
  :D
  
  kaaranam kEttathukkaaga pazikku pazi akkaa
  
  
  anbudan
  iyappan
  
  
• From: rasigan (@ 217.161.117.49) on: Sun Sep 7 12:41:07 EDT 2003
  
  Shakthi,
  
  Kalai nayathodum
  aasaigal niraiveraatha
  ullathin azhntha velipaadodum
  kavidhai ezhuthi irupathu miga arumai.
  
  Intha kavithaiyil ulla varigal ITHU VERUM KAVITHAI MATTUME endru ninaikka marukirathu.
  
  Ungal kavithaigalil eppothum oru yekkam, sogam, izhappu therigirathu. (thavaragaa irunthaal mannikavum)
  
  Suga raagam SOGAM thaane...
  
  Kavithai nandraaga irukirathu. Paaraattukkal !!
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Sun Sep 7 13:45:20 EDT 2003
  
  "Suga raagam SOGAM thaane...'
  
  Yaaradhu, pORadhu?
  Kuyil paadalaam, than mugam kaattumaa ?
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Sun Sep 7 13:47:07 EDT 2003
  
  "Pagalavanai pidikkaada kodumai
  Pagal vesham podum Madamai"
  
  uLLe azhugaREn, veLiyE sirikkiREn
  Nalla vEsham dhaan, veLuthu vaangaREn
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Sun Sep 7 14:07:45 EDT 2003
  
  "Iravukkai engum en Ooona kuralukku
  Nilavoli taruvadO tanimai!"
  
  Iravukkaay uRavukkaay Engum indha Ezhaikkaay
  Neeyum kaay nidhamum kaay nEsam nenjil veesak kaay
  Kavidhai kaay anaalum nijamum kaay aagumO
  Kavidhaikkaay kaayaadhO veNNilavum inRiravil ?
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Sun Sep 7 19:03:11 EDT 2003
  
  "kaayaadhO veNNilavum inRiravil ?"
  
  "kaayaadhO veNNilavum eNNangaLil" - enRu maatRi koLga.
  
  (veNNilavu eNNangaLil kaayndhu adhu kavithaiyaaga ootRedukkiRadhu enRu poruL. KaRpanai nijamaaga irukka vENdiyadhillai enRu kooRap pattuLLadhu. Athikkaay kaay kaay paattai kEttavarkaL virumbuvar)
  
  
• From: shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Mon Sep 8 05:52:14 EDT 2003
  
  s-observer,
  
  nalla paadalgalai paadi magizhvithtadarkku nandri
  
  "KaRpanai nijamaaga irukka vENdiyadhillai enRu kooRap pattuLLadhu."<<<
  
  nandri! nalla porul, ellorukkum purindhaal sari daan
  
  rasigan,
  
  thx a tonne
  
  "Intha kavithaiyil ulla varigal ITHU VERUM KAVITHAI MATTUME endru ninaikka marukirathu.
  
  Ungal kavithaigalil eppothum oru yekkam, sogam, izhappu therigirathu. "<<<
  
  INTHA KAVITHAIYIL ULLATHU NIJA VAAZHKAI ALLAAAA
  VAZHKAI ALLA
  ADAIYUM TANDIIIYA KARPANAI MATTUME
  KARPANAI MATTUME....
  
  S-observer padithathaal, ade nyaabagathil oru cinema tune type panni vitten....
  
  manidan unarnthu kolla idhu manitha kaadhal alla endra mettil padithu koLga!
  
  
  iyappan,
  
  "thamayan unnidam sollaam seytha
  kaariyangal nee arinthu Ethum undO
  
  :D
  
  kaaranam kEttathukkaaga pazikku pazi akkaa
  "<<<
  
  hmm...naan arinda karanam....sollava???
  :)
  sari po....pozhaichu po...
  
  hehe
  
  tk,
  
  "pOna kavidhaiyin 'punch missing. koi baat nahim..'...45 anyway. "<<
  
  chalo aapne 45 tho diya naa..wohi kaafi hain..
  kushi se pagal horahi hoon ..lol
  
  ¾ýÂÉ¡§Éý!
  
  
  
• From: sori-Observer (@ cvg-65-27-251-73.cinci.rr.com) on: Mon Sep 8 11:40:03 EDT 2003
  
  "INTHA KAVITHAIYIL ULLATHU NIJA VAAZHKAI ALLA"
  
  Kavidhai kaay anaalum nijamum kaay aagumO
  
  Kaay enbadhu kasappu uNarvukaLukku uvamaiyaaga sollap paduvathu. Kavidhaiyil kasappu therindhaalum, nija vaazhvil kasappu irukkaadhu enRu 'kavidhai kaay aanaalum, nijamum kaay aagumo?' enRu sollap pattadhu.
  
  Aanaal idhu sariyaaga kaniyaadha suvaiyatRa kavidhai enRu oru silEdai varumaaRum sollap pattuLLadhu (oru nagaichuvaikkaaga avvaaRu sonnadhu). Pulavar Shakti vaazga.
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Sep 10 03:13:51 EDT 2003
  
  s.observer
  
  :)
  
  Aanaal idhu sariyaaga kaniyaadha suvaiyatRa kavidhai enRu oru silEdai varumaaRum sollap pattuLLadhu
  
  kanindha pazhamaai kavithai inikka thara muyarchkkiren.
  
  "Pulavar Shakti vaazga. "<<<
  
  edO tamizh cinemalai varrra scene maathiri irukku
  
  lol
  
  thx for ur comments.
  :)
  
  
• From: bang (@ localhost) on: Mon Jan 12 06:17:01
  
  dfdsf
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on: Mon Jan 12 21:28:48 EST 2004
  
  Iniya Shakthi,
  T Rajendar ungga pakkatthu veedo?
  Irunthaalum avarudaiya
  thaalam podum dappa (
  Eg:( Theruvile kidappathu kuppai
  saddiyile irupathu aappai
  alavukku minjinaa thoppai
  athaiyum minjinaa good bye)
  
  vaarthaigail pohl illaamal
  unggaludaiya thanitthuvam iruppathai unarghiren.
  Vaarthai prayoghanggal sirappaga amainthullana....
  irunthaalum oru kehlvi...
  kanavughalum ilatchiyanggalum avaravar urimai...
  aanaal piarukkaaga vaazhumbhothu
  athu udaipadave seighindrana....
  ithu ennudaiya vaazhkai anubavamum kooda!
  Pirarukkaaga vaazhum vaazhkai verumai enbhtai ennaal ehdukolla mudiyavillai...
  athil artham ullathu...
  namathu pedrorghalum..
  aneghamaaaga avargalin sonthak kanavugalai orangkaddividdu namakaaga vaazhavillaiya?
  namathu vaazhkayin vedriye
  avargaludaiya kanavaai maadrikolla villaiya?
  Avargaludaiya vaazhkai....
  verumai endru sollividalaagumaa?
  
  Athe nehratthil....thanimaiyil verumai
  athan paathippu..neeggal kooryiruppathu pohl
  migha koormaiyaanathu.
  
  Thanimai enakku pidikkum...-athil
  kavithai nalla vedikkum
  nilavin oliyum pidikkum -athil
  nenjam unggal kavithaiyai padikkum
  
  
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Wed Jan 14 02:43:59 EST 2004
  
  NANDRI anand,
  
  ungaL eNNAm sariyE ...irunthaalum sila nErangaLiL
  
  naan pirarukkay nammai naamE thulaikkinRom.
  
  athil varuthamum undu. santhoshamum undu.
  
  santhosham enRu mattum solla mudiyathu
  
  
• From: Anand (@ 210.187.84.130) on: Wed Jan 14 03:27:31 EST 2004
  
  Unggal santhoshamum purighirathu..
  varutthamum purighirathu.
  Varutthanggal santhoshanggalaaga maaralaam
  santhoshanggalthaan varutthanggalaaga maarakkodaathu.
  Anbudan Anand
  
  
• From: Sathish (@ 219.95.185.111) on: Fri Jan 16 01:58:57 EST 2004
  
  un valkaiyin sakthi
  unthan elluthil therigindrathu,
  un manathin paathipu
  unthan sintanaiyil therigindrathu,
  
  
• From: Shakthi priya (@ 203-195-199-244.now-india.net.in) on: Sat Jan 17 13:15:22 EST 2004
  
  Thank you Sathish!
  
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