Topic started by P.Manikandan (@ rtrgva-1.temenos.com) on Tue Jul 23 00:06:38 .
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Vellikkilamai thorum un Veetinil
Vilakketriya pothu En
Nenjinil Neruppai Yetrinnaye-
Gnaabagamirukkirathaa?

Uraimore Vaanga Varumbothellam
Orappaarvaiyaal En
Uiraiyum Eduthu selvaaye
Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?

Ovvorumurai Kulikka sellumpothum
Un Ammaavidam Solvathu pola
Urakka kathivittu Selavvye-
Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?

"Kannadasan Kavithaigal" Padithuvittu
Kaadhal Varigali mattum
Adikkodittu Ennidam Tharuvaaye--
Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?

Dhaavani Kattiyirukkum Dhinam Mattum
En Akka Maganai Konja
En Veedu thedi Varuvaaye--
Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?

Naan Valartha Jodi Puraavai
KonjiVittu Oru Puraavirku
Un Perai Vaithuvittu
Senraaye --
Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?

Un Kanavanodu Sellumpothum
Un Kadaikkannaal Ennai Paarthu
Kanneer Sindhivittu Ponaaye--
Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?

Responses:

• From: VaanMathi .A (@ 202.140.148.222) on: Tue Jul 23 03:22:54
  
  kathalarkalai pirippathil antha iraivanukku appati enna santhosamoo.
  
  anaithu varikalum arumai...
  
  idayathil tholainthu kondruntha ninaivukalai ninaivu paduthukirathu ungal kavithai.
  
  thodarnthu ezhuthungal ethipaarkiraen ungal kavithaikalai...
  
  by
  entrum Natpudan
  VaanMathi .A
  
  
• From: P.Manikandan (@ rtrgva-1.temenos.com) on: Tue Jul 23 04:42:16
  
  Mikka Nanri VaanMathi Avargale....
  
  Natpudan
  Mani
  
  
• From: deepa (@ 61.11.73.12) on: Tue Jul 23 06:37:32
  
  neeru pootha neruppai nenjukkul
  erindhu kondirundha ninaivugalukku
  ennai vaarthu pogiradhe indha kavithai
  niyayama?
  
  valigal vaarthaigalil,
  Udhiram kasigiradhu idhayathil.....
  
  Nallarukku.
  
  
• From: "kavitai" (@ cache5-1.ruh.isu.net.sa) on: Tue Jul 23 06:54:05
  
  Dear Manikandan
  
  Ovvoru manitanilum adangippOna
  sugamAna sumaithan kAdhl
  
  athu oru suwAsamum kUda
  
  <<< Un Ammaavidam Solvathu pola
  Urakka kathivittu Selavvye-">>>> a..ha
  
  nijamAna varihal(sollich senravargal oru murai sollippArkkavum...
  sollakkEttavarhal oru murai nenaitthuppArkkavum...Ganaabagamirukkirathaa?
  
  <<< En Akka Maganai Konja
  En Veedu thedi Varuvaaye-->>>>> enna Mani..!!manatil pesaindu pesindu Ganaabagamgal oru kanam ennai kolhiratE
  
  todarungal.. oru malaiyAi nanaiyattum gapahangalil kavitaihal
  
  
  Enrum anpudan
  
  "kavitai"
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
• From: Govin (@ 203.129.195.100) on: Tue Jul 23 08:20:46
  
  hmmmmm,
  coffee tharennu solli en sattaile ooththivittu
  thuvaichu tharennu solli kalatti ponathum,
  mazhai varum varai en veettil kaaththirunthu
  kudai vechi kondu vidungannu kenji
  oru kudaiyil iruvar otti sella koochcham kondu
  thalli thalli naan sella thalai nanainthathum
  achachoo nanainjutingalaa nnu aval
  thaavaniyil thalai thuvatti vittathaiyum,
  naalanaa poraatha joke naan sonnaal kooda
  kulungi kulungi aval siriththathaiyum,
  ninga thirumbi varum varai kaathiruppennu solli
  kalyaanam aagi aval kaanaamal ponathaiyum,
  
  solla maRanthuttingalaa manikandan?
  
  
  
  
  
• From: P.Manikandan (@ rtrgva-1.temenos.com) on: Tue Jul 23 09:26:58
  
  Anaivarukkum Nanri....
  Deepa, Kavithai, Govin and Van mathi anaivarukkum nanri.....
  
  
• From: Shakthi (@ bangdp-33-14.mantraonline.com) on: Wed Jul 24 03:12:47
  
  Kozhai kaadhal!
  Sollada kaadhalellam sorgathil seeradu!
  
  "gnabagam irukirada?" endra sol engeyo ketta maadiri irukiradu
  
  Kavidai takes us to one's teen age.
  :)
  
  kozhaigale kaadhalikaadeergal!
  
  
• From: FlowerGuy (@ 202.95.127.5) on: Wed Jul 24 13:13:39
  
  manikandan..this poem's style reminds me vijay milton's 'kolusugal pesakkoodum'.
  i think it came as bits and pieces in ananta vikatan also.
  ninaivirukkirathaa? endra azhagaana thalaippil ezhuthiyirundhaar.
  
  ungal kavithai arputhamaaga irukkirathu.
  malarum ninaivugal anaithum silirkka vaikkirathu.
  
  kavithaiyin thalaippaiyum,kavithaiyin kadaisi naangu varigalaiyum eduthuvittaal/maattrivittaal...
  kavithai kaaviyamaagividum enbathu adiyen karuthu.
  anbudan,
  FlowerGuy
  
  
• From: kurankaatti (@ sf-proxy2.montgomery.com) on: Wed Jul 24 17:44:08
  
  kavithai nanraaka irukirathu.
  thalaippu "suspense"i utaiththuvittathu.
  kataici varikaLil innum aazham thEvai enRu ninaikirEn.
  
  

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