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bingleguy
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Reader's perception 
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Chevy,
Excellent narration, could have continued with clarity in the climax (okei lets call it 'nearing climax') as well.
utter confusion at the end.
I loved ur narration, narration takes the shape of what u wanna convey, may it be curiosity, eerie feelings or just plain description.
keep writing.
I DISAGREE e-friendships can be this traumatic, though I agree with the fact that e-love or e-friendships or even e-acquaintances need to be thoroughly assured before we make the next move.
For that matter, in real life situations too, mentally ill or occasionally cranky ppl are tough to spot. |
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chevy
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| Shakthiprabha wrote: | Chevy,
Excellent narration, could have continued with clarity in the climax (okei lets call it 'nearing climax') as well.
utter confusion at the end.
I loved ur narration, narration takes the shape of what u wanna convey, may it be curiosity, eerie feelings or just plain description.
keep writing.
I DISAGREE e-friendships can be this traumatic, though I agree with the fact that e-love or e-friendships or even e-acquaintances need to be thoroughly assured before we make the next move.
For that matter, in real life situations too, mentally ill or occasionally cranky ppl are tough to spot. |
dhaank yu 
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bingleguy
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| Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:45 pm Post subject: |
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| Shakthiprabha wrote: | Chevy,
Excellent narration, could have continued with clarity in the climax (okei lets call it 'nearing climax') as well.
utter confusion at the end.
I loved ur narration, narration takes the shape of what u wanna convey, may it be curiosity, eerie feelings or just plain description.
keep writing.
I DISAGREE e-friendships can be this traumatic, though I agree with the fact that e-love or e-friendships or even e-acquaintances need to be thoroughly assured before we make the next move.
For that matter, in real life situations too, mentally ill or occasionally cranky ppl are tough to spot. |
Shakthi
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well done, Chevy!
this was really interesting to read, as well...great writing skills!  ....it really shows.... |
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Shakthiprabha.
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chevy
see u got a lot of response and fans
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chevy
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| Sinthiya wrote: | well done, Chevy!
this was really interesting to read, as well...great writing skills! ....it really shows.... |
thank you so much sinthiya
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chevy
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chevy
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| crazy wrote: | chevy
see u got a lot of response and fans |
 cha ... no yaa .. ntn lyk dat
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| Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:41 pm Post subject: THE DRESSING ROOM |
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BRAVO.. THE STORY WAS REALLY FAST AND THE DESCRIPTION VERY GOOD..
ITS A WORK OF A GENIUS..
CHEVY, U CAN WRITE MANY MORE THRILLERS...
BUT U MUST NOT LEAVE THE CLIMAX FOR THE READER TO DECIDE..
OR ATLEAST TEL US NOW WAT U WANT THE CLIMAX TO BE..
WOULD U LIKE TO HAVE VINOD KILLED BY A GHOST???
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chevy
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| Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 7:18 am Post subject: Re: THE DRESSING ROOM |
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| dr_ronny wrote: |
BRAVO.. THE STORY WAS REALLY FAST AND THE DESCRIPTION VERY GOOD..
ITS A WORK OF A GENIUS..
CHEVY, U CAN WRITE MANY MORE THRILLERS...
BUT U MUST NOT LEAVE THE CLIMAX FOR THE READER TO DECIDE..
OR ATLEAST TEL US NOW WAT U WANT THE CLIMAX TO BE..
WOULD U LIKE TO HAVE VINOD KILLED BY A GHOST??? |
THANK U ronny...
the whole point of the thirller is to leave the reader leave the reader exasperated without any ending ... so i don't hav ny answer fer dat..
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chevy
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| Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 3:28 am Post subject: Re: THE DRESSING ROOM |
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| dr_ronny wrote: |
BRAVO.. THE STORY WAS REALLY FAST AND THE DESCRIPTION VERY GOOD..
ITS A WORK OF A GENIUS..
CHEVY, U CAN WRITE MANY MORE THRILLERS...
BUT U MUST NOT LEAVE THE CLIMAX FOR THE READER TO DECIDE..
OR ATLEAST TEL US NOW WAT U WANT THE CLIMAX TO BE..
WOULD U LIKE TO HAVE VINOD KILLED BY A GHOST??? |
i totally love the last question
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Good story..
My POV:
. some girl did really cheat him.. there is no ghost.. how did that book escape unnoticed for so many years?? and i guess it was really red body paint not blood... no one got killed.. suresh met vinod, told what happened and they both just fled away.. 
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